In any profession—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.`
For better organzations, should a ldeadership be changed in five years? The statement questions whether professions in power have to be kept or resigned periodically. Maintaining leadership seems to have beneficail effects on oraganizations’ stability. However, I believe that periodical changes of power would make the oraganization better since these changes can give changes to reevaluate and reform themselve.
Maintaining leadership is certainly one of ways to keep organization stable. Although changes in leaders’ view might somtimes occur, core perpectives of leadership on the organization would be maintain. Likewise, other related stake holders might keep there view on the organization. In this environment, few would think the organizations will face severe transformation. Furturemore, this makes their employee sustainable. Since many workers feel worried, and even fear, when the leadership supplanted, same management during the long period can foster employees’ thought that their organization is stable to work.
Nevertheness, a true promoter of organizations’ improvement would be periodical replacement of leadership. The importance first task of new leadership is to investigate privious management. In this task, new leaders can find not only useful experiences but also some abusing of previous leaders. For example, many democratic nations revise faults of previous governments after a regime change.
Additionaly, these fresh leadership can infuse new energy into old organizations. As a new starter, they create new vision for the organizaion’s future and sometime modity a organizational structure to achieve their goal. Even though organizational shifts can some noises in groups, nevertheless it is a needed growth pain and the shift can make the new era of a organization.
In conclusion, I believe changing leadership have more beneficial effects than maintaining. Given that our society is in a rapidly changed world, periodical revising groups’ faults and energy from new leadership might be a crucial to enhance the probability of organizations’ success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rganizaion’s future and sometime modity a organizational structure to achieve the...
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Line 7, column 362, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n and the shift can make the new era of a organization. In conclusion, I belie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 306.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92156862745 5.05705443957 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49333412575 2.79657885939 125% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0806665837 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3684210526 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0519658924264 0.243740707755 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0191067250552 0.0831039109588 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424705090339 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0303896133255 0.150359130593 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438559327979 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.76 12.1639044944 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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