In many countries, the proportion of old people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society?
In the present age, the number of old people has increased significantly, especially in the last decade. The result is that the demographics change and the population ages. While some people consider that having more old people sounds like a good thing, from my perspective, I believe that elderly may bring negative influences to the society and the people of concern.
On the one hand, some people are of the view that the rise of elders could cause serious problems and I totally agree. In the first place, it can be clearly seen that aging population and more retirement rate might result in labour shortage, as there are less people to do the work. This action could create an economy hole.
In addition to the first idea, it can be hardly denied that when they are more people reach their twilight years, they would have to deal with physical health problems, this means that more medical services and pensions are needed. This action can pose a financial burden for government. Also, the government would have to allocate less money on upgrading other public facilities such as school facilities, road systems to name a few.
On the other hand, there is no denying that people in old age still have an extremely valuable contributions to societies. They can still participate in some jobs that are not physically demanding, for example, coaches or doctors, as they have rich experience in both work and life. Elders also play such a vital role in taking care of grandchildren when their parents are not at home.
In conclusion, it is my firm belief that while the elderly could bring positive influences, a society with the large proportion of them can have serious impact for both the economics and societies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 256, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...result in labour shortage, as there are less people to do the work. This action coul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87755102041 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55650204703 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56462585034 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7506069699 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.307692308 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239371588668 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751719284919 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637532086213 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128842904525 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615614700681 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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