Topic: Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Nowadays, a number of criminals have a tendency to risk their freedom with illegal behaviors when released. There are numerous reasons behind this phenomenon which mainly regard economic and social factors, so authority governments should have urgent feasible approaches to alleviate this issue.
It is obvious that economic and social conditions are two fundamental factors which cause ever-going the number of individuals with criminal activities. From the former perspective, it is unreasonable to say that all those reoffending stems from pure evil intentions because some people live in poor conditions which compel them to do this. An example to illustrate this is when a member of a family gets severely ill without enough money to operate surgery , so drives individuals to illegal behaviors. From the latter respect, social conditions also significantly contribute to the increase of ex-convicts in society. Unfortunately , some children were born in a family with poor financial background which deprives them of the chance to join a proper educational system, causing ethical misbehavior and misleading understanding. In other aspects, it is unavoidable cyber-bullying or discrimination in the learning environment for individuals with illegal backgrounds, so they can foster resentment against others at school out of anger and frustration.
In order to mitigate the number of criminals reoffending when being released from prison, the authorized government should opt for various feasible measures. One of the most effective solutions is to improve the living conditions of those in extreme poverty with effective welfare and educational programs such as free education and vocational training programs. Another crucial thing is that campaigns should be launched by the government to eliminate societal prejudice against ex-convicts by showcasing success stories of individuals who overcame their criminal backgrounds.
In conclusion, although there are a lot of culprits causing re-offend growth in society recently, this issue also can be solved by several efforts to promote less prejudiced attitudes by raising awareness via campaigns or educational policies for those in needy circumstances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80061349693 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16075911776 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61963190184 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.6015350619 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.583333333 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1666666667 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112135947383 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386595741394 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268716657688 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701668334622 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021609163872 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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