Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Governments legislate punishment for different types of crimes to either prevent them or reduce the rate of them and if just a fixed punishment for all crimes led to regulation. In my opinion, it is better to set different punishments for different crimes.
Death penalty is one of the punishments that governments consider for violent crimes such as murder, assault, human trafficking, people smuggling, etc... These criminals must be punished with the highest punishment because their crimes affect on social and cause people not have feel peace and security. All asset of a government is the trust of its people.
But some crimes are minor and cannot set high punishment for them like illegal parking, robbery, burglary, arson, kidnapping, etc... The judge must punish them in person or pay money and after some time release them. Although most minor crimes can be forgiven, juries and judges don’t do this because of that they don’t commit crimes again.
In fact, no government cannot set a fixed punishment for all crimes. If they legislate as a rule all people have a tendency to commit violent crimes because think that minor crimes don’t have enough proceeds, in addition, it does not matter whether minor or violent the criminal should be dead. The social impact of this rule is very harmful and most of people harm.
As a result, it is impossible to set a fixed punishment for all crimes and it is better to divide crimes into minor and violent crimes and for each of them set different punishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 236, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...highest punishment because their crimes affect on social and cause people not have feel p...
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Line 4, column 346, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...impact of this rule is very harmful and most of people harm. As a result, it is impossible to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93359375 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55299960964 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50390625 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.423687924 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3630633965 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140201711038 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799492795671 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229639487508 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030724016908 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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