You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor.
Write a letter thanking your friend. In your letter:
• Explain what the favor was
• Describe how this favor helped you
• Offer compensation
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ___,
Dear Marie,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude as you have done a huge favor by looking after my dog during my absence when I went on vacation. Thank you so much again.
I would like you to share my feelings. Firstly, this vacation was long overdue and also my last opportunity. I had to grab this opportunity. Secondly, this is a new city for me and as I live alone, finding someone who can be trustworthy to take care of a dog was difficult. Yet you came forward and helped me and took care of him as his own.
Therefore, I would like you to offer $500 as compensation, also I invite you to dinner at my place as a thank you. Please do come and let me know.
I look forward to seeing you soon.
warm regards,
Kajal
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No. of Words: 143 150
Minimum 150 words wanted
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 143 150
No. of Characters: 566 900
No. of Different Words: 92 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.458 4.7
Average Word Length: 3.958 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.29 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 29 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 22 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 11 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 7 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.917 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.023 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.364 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.674 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.176 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5