Many animal species around the world are endangered, and each year we lose more species as the remaining animals in a population die.
Discuss the possible causes of species loss, and suggest some ways that we might be able to preserve some of these vanishing species.
The extinction of numerous species has witnessed a significant escalating rate globally and the level of species endangerment is increasing each year. This essay delves into the causes behind the phenomenon and proposes solutions to preserve endangered species.
Human acts are primarily responsible for animal habitat destruction which lead to species loss. Making farms by destroying forests and areas where animals live and mass production are harming the animal's living habitat, and threatening many species’s survival rate. Poaching and hunting, which are driven by the illicit wildlife trade of demand for rare pets and materials such as rhino horns, or elephant ivory, are directly killing many wild species.
To address these challenges, individual and governmental approaches are examined. Firstly, animals need to be protected in their natural habitats. The government can build preserves and parks as a solution to keep species safe, it can be also considered as a way to gain financial advantages from tourists. For instance, national parks in Africa are well-known for preserving various endangered and scarce species like wild buffalos, rhinos, antelopes, etc. A further solution to discuss is to increase people's awareness of the importance of each species on earth, therefore the demand for endangered animals will decline. Public awareness campaigns, which are held by non-profit social organizations, are instrumental in shifting societal attitudes toward wildlife conservation.
In short, species loss might be prevented if protective strategies are put into action. Government policies and public awareness are important elements of the fighting in preserving animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95338720794 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5184194776 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296199713921 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971166668234 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620437910151 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17134512916 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242126993658 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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