Task 2
The practice of illegally hunting wild animals continues to cause concern in many countries, particularly developing countries.
What are the causes of such hunting?
What are the effects on the animals, and on the wider human society in these countries and beyond?
Poaching is now contributing to many concerns all around the world, especially developing countries. The primary causes of this phenomenon is commercial and cultural; and the effect on the animals is habitat loss, which may lead to further a natural heritage erosion of a whole country.
The primary motivation for such hunting animals is profit which is made from animal materials. There is always an active group of small but wealthy people around the globe paying paying high prices for this unscrupulous practice. The high prices are attached to novelty or rarity value beside imaginary medicinal properties that the illegal traders promote in bear and gorilla market. A secondary reason is due to the culture of a country, there is custom eating wildlife for being healthier and stronger in Vietnam. Though the government tries their best to prevent illegal hunting, this phenomenon still happens lively in northern place country, particularly in rural regions which are near forestal areas.
Turning to the effects of poaching, the most significant consequence is habitat loss, which damages the ecosystem seriously. In nature, every specie all lives dependently each other on direct or indirect way; therefore, the disappearance of any individual can lead to a vast species becomming endangered and vanishing out of the world once day. On a further perspective, this can construct a natural heritage of a country which comprises wildlife, landscapes and natural resources. People cannot live in a place where the ecosystem is severely damaged with following extremes such as climate change, air pollution, soil erosion, etc. Therefore, there is always a long list of aticles on Vnexpress, a national newspaper in Vietnam, appearing to alarm people for this issue.
In conclusion, poaching can be the result of commercial and cultural motivations and its effects not only habitat loss but also a full erosion of a country in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: paying
...all but wealthy people around the globe paying paying high prices for this unscrupulous pract...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31715210356 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80894590608 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605177993528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3201081363 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.384615385 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14135490807 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465137511408 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511662091093 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864050230546 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323497117882 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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