ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In this modern age, the rate of abortion has significantly plummeted, though it is a pressing concern. Although many people support the fact that it should be legalized, others are not in favor. While I completely agree with the former statement, I will examine both views and explain my opinion along with examples.
On the one hand, abortion is the treatment done during pregnancy to stop the growth of the unborn child. But, there are women who have to go through such a painful process for a few genuine reasons. Many culprits take advantage of this process illegally. First of all, people sometimes miscarry the girl child because of gender choice as favoritism plays a negative role. Another reason, some willingly want to get ridden of illegitimate kids. Moreover, the child bearer has to face consequences moving on in the future. For instance, a lady who abort a unborn, has a risk of difficulty conceiving again.
On the flip side, in some cases where the unborn kid seems to be unfit for the future, and also if the woman is willing to have an abortion done, then there is no harm in a legal procedure. Studies say that the young teen is mature enough to make decisions on her own. It is totally her choice to do, but only in the right way. It is for the safety of all. For instance, if a person is not financially dependent and not in right condition to take care of the kid, the state is considerate. Furthermore, it saves suppressing the victims and safeguards them.
To sum up, Although the abortion rate is increasing twice, it can be done in a legal way as it protects the pregnant lady in many other ways. However, they should be aware of the health consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t ridden of illegitimate kids. Moreover, the child bearer has to face consequence...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... future. For instance, a lady who abort a unborn, has a risk of difficulty concei...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is for the safety of all. For instance, if a person is not financially dependent...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a legal way" with adverb for "legal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ate is increasing twice, it can be done in a legal way as it protects the pregnant lady in man...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ld be aware of the health consequences. .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, as to, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62943326069 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9806839803 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4444444444 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169060839612 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435482133771 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462429510434 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109948402807 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054236140274 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.