You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
In the letter:
explain why you were at the restaurant
describe the problems
write about the action you want the manager to take
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my extreme annoyance with your dish.
My name is Emily Rose and it was my first time visiting your hotel with my family. Let me explain my case. I wanted to give a treat to my parents as a thank you. On top of that, it was my father's birthday.
On my insist, somehow he got ready to dine in with us. While he was excited, he had expectations from me as a son. So, I checked your reviews and ratings and picked your restaurant to dine which I wished I had not.
Before coming to the hotel, I reserved for four people two days ago in advance. But, there was no vacancy and had a long waiting time. It almost took an hour to get a seat. Although the order was ready and served immediately, I am afraid the food was terrible as salty as it could be possibly. I could not help at the moment because somehow there was a rush.
Anyway, to compensate for the inconvenience caused, I would like you to give either a free meal coupon or a refund. Please let me know.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Emily Rose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my extreme annoy...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...wanted to give a treat to my parents as a thank you. On top of that, it was my fathers ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, look, so, while, i am afraid, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25358851675 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36245442428 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622009569378 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4036459383 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.2941176471 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2941176471 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129611115889 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412824700623 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044104817503 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752380453191 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329222588479 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.48 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.