You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
• correct the information in the article
• explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
• suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regards to your recently published article about Giza, as I wish to raise a few issues on its accuracy.
It is with regret that I spotted a few factual errors while going through the publication, ones that I fear might tarnish the reputation of the tourism-driven city. The authors seem to have relied on outdated witness statements to establish their report on the Giza pyramids as a tourist attraction.
Due to the high readability of your reputable magazine, I was keen on doing the due diligence of countering the atricle's claims. Please find attached the newly passed legislations about tour guides and the exploitation of tourists. I have also included a summary of reviews from multiple websites after the implementation of the new regulations.
Kindly review the material and make sure the article is revised accordingly.
Looking forward to your response.
Yours Sincerely,
Assem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in regards to your recently published article about G...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21710526316 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9919603145 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703947368421 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7799352242 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1111111111 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132319229317 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532266477872 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397298120866 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069807947682 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411316200425 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 7.59969072165 135% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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