You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.
Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter
° describe what you enjoyed about the course
° say how much cooking you’ve done since the course
° suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my gratitude for the recent cookery course I have taken at your school. I hope this letter finds you in good health and great appetite!
Being the perfectionist that I am, I have always struggled with picking up cooking. You are always left wondering how much a "sensible amount" of dressing is, which pot is best used with which item... You get the idea. Though I agreed that cooking is a survival skill and not just an art that stimulates a fundamental human sense, but cooking had still evaded my reach, until I finally signed up for the course. The hands-on experience I have gained during the classes was exactly what I needed to overcome my overwhelming obsession over the technical details that keep me from cooking efficiently, if at all.
I was glad to finally practice cooking in professionally supervised settings, where the mutual basics of so many popular dishes were covered. I now have a general baseline of what to do whether it is stewing, steaming, frying (stir-fried or deep-fried), baking, or grilling, as all these methods were covered. A total of 40 hours in the kitchen were more than enough for a self-professed rookie like myself to undust that cookbook I had always kept and start putting it to the test.
Now as I have started exlporing more and more cuisines and become able to stick to healthy eating, I would love to join you again for a baking-focused course. You see, a lot of popular treats are deep fried and therefore contain much unhealthy fats, be it french fries, falafel, fried chicken, or fried shrimp. Baking would be a perfect alternative and will also allow learners to take up desserts.
Looking forward to learning with you again.
Yours Sincerely,
Assem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... You are always left wondering how much a 'sensible amount' of dressing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 937.175257732 157% => OK
No of words: 303.0 206.0 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84818481848 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75446896951 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 127.690721649 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646864686469 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 290.88556701 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5824608359 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.928571429 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216004140508 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694803477236 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725377418183 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131074740326 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132836298668 0.0580467560999 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 41.2886597938 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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