More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
The alarming rate at which wild animals are facing extinction or being listed as endangered species is a pressing issue that demands immediate attention. The primary reasons for this crisis include habitat destruction, poaching, climate change, and pollution. If these trends continue, the delicate balance of our ecosystems will be disrupted, leading to irreversible consequences for both wildlife and humanity.
Habitat destruction is one of the leading causes of the decline in wild animal populations. Deforestation, urbanization, and agricultural expansion have significantly reduced the available habitats for many species, forcing them into smaller and fragmented areas where they struggle to find food, shelter, and mates. Without adequate space to thrive, these animals face increased competition, predation, and stress, ultimately leading to population declines and even extinction.
Poaching, driven by the illegal wildlife trade, poses a significant threat to many endangered species. Animals such as elephants, rhinos, and tigers are hunted for their tusks, horns, and skins, pushing them to the brink of extinction. Despite international efforts to combat poaching, the demand for exotic animal products continues to fuel this illegal industry. Without stricter enforcement of anti-poaching laws and increased awareness about the consequences of wildlife trafficking, many species will continue to face the threat of extinction.
To address the crisis of wild animal extinction, a multi-faceted approach is needed. Governments, conservation organizations, and individuals must work together to protect and preserve the habitats of endangered species, enforce laws against poaching and illegal wildlife trade, mitigate the effects of climate change, and reduce pollution. Education and awareness campaigns can also play a crucial role in changing attitudes towards wildlife and promoting sustainable practices. By taking action now, we can ensure the survival of our planet's most precious and irreplaceable inhabitants for future generations to enjoy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03401360544 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11674519431 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62925170068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8651996558 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.714285714 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171290310985 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596039853218 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046470409217 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106685915049 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059534608496 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.69 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.02 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.