In many professional sports, it becomes common among athletes to use the prohibited substances to boost up their overall performance.This happens because stiff competition and lax testing system are the main causes of enhancing this problem and it should be lessen by imposing strict rules and regulation at playground.
One of the main reason behind this is fierce competition faced by individuals. As most of the players tried their best but unfortunately they did nothing for their team. Thus, they depressed badly. That is why, they feel banned substances are the best way to take advantage it over other opponents. Another reason is that, lenient testing system initiate to fulfill the wrong intentions of players to won the match in any case. For instance, a high profile martial artist Jon John used PED notoriously and how easily he got away from all the alleges during in an interview in 2015.
However, some measures should be established to maintain the equality at sports area. Firstly, higher fine should be imposed on those individuals who try to violate the rules. In this way, they will think twice to take any steroid substances and will play the games by following the code of conduct of sports organizations. Secondly, drug testing and drug screen are the most effective ways to detect the absence or presence of drug in a body. By doing this, players will never think to cheat anybody. Also, the holes of testing system should be eradicated and take strict against those who took it lightly.
To sum up, strong competition and testing system are the main roots for promoting the banned substances in playing area, which should be controlled by imposing higher fines and ban on players.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
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Message: Did you mean 'lessened'?
Suggestion: lessened
...enhancing this problem and it should be lessen by imposing strict rules and regulation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in any case, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0034965035 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65920297415 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604895104895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0100907879 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.214285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125107287352 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363530929825 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419251136371 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818995136072 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368272394925 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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