Some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? And give examples
The government utilises various means of information to gather data on the needs of people of the country such as infrastructure, facilities and work allotments to benefit the citizens.I fully agree that the government must prioritise healthcare instead of other important areas as it human lives take higher priority than other things and this essay will explain the reasons for the opinion
Firstly , the government should allocate resources for proper transportation for hospitals in case of emergencies as there is a lack in the number and quality of vehicles used for transporting patients and accident victims.Another need for the healthcare department is the provision of proper training for all medical professionals.For example the government must initiate proper practises to be followed by doctors and nurses to ensure no underhanded activities can occur and incompetent doctors are given an opportunity to learn more and can avoid making mistakes during critical situations.
In addition , the necessity of more medical machinery in more hospitals and clinics to ensure a patient can be treated properly in any place instead of changing hospitals due to insufficient equipment to help treat the patient and the provisions to construct more hospitals in remote areas where there is a no proper medium of communication and electricity.For example, health care has always been neglected in rural areas therefore, smaller scale hospitals in villages can help people get treated without travelling a distance to get to a hospital
In conclusion, I agree that the government must set aside resources and prioritise healthcare rather than other important areas as there is a desperate need for more hospitals with proper machinery and transportation to a hospital with proper trained professionals is necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61428571429 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20970373688 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 140.0 20.2975951904 690% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.0 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 786.0 106.682146367 737% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 140.0 20.7667163134 674% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 39.5 7.06120827912 559% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145414763597 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119868903867 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294518048889 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106549201429 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610568377831 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 75.0 13.0946893788 573% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -87.54 50.2224549098 -174% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 60.3 11.3001002004 534% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.44 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.04 8.58950901804 175% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 58.0 10.1190380762 573% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.7795591182 547% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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