Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?
Fossil fuels nowadays are essential in our everyday and life they are difficult to compensate for because we use the in everything like producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, we are nearing a point where all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted we can conserve these resources by controlling its use and using alternatives like solar power,
We should take better care of the world’s reserves of fossil fuel that are known as petroleum because in the past it helped us in generating electricity and running the factories and powered a lot of innovations and inventions that would change humanity for better or worse but currently its dominant uses are in transportation and producing electricity for the common folk but we should be aware not to deplete it since it can’t be reproduced or reused one of the things we must be doing is check the fuel transporting vehicles because a lot of them have lose container locks so they leak a little amounts of the fuel even so if every vehicles leaks a little if we add it up it becomes a large amount,
Some alternatives to fossil fuels are solar power and electricity that are produced by nature like the dynamos in the great dam of Egypt and the great deserts windmills, currently it’s still in the developing phases but as examples the tesla cars that are powered by electricity and houses in Alexandria that use solar power for their daily lives in the I presume that in the near future these thing will became a lot more common and mainstream,
We should take care of what remains of the fossil fuels before it becomes depleted in the near future and be prepared to use alternatives in the worst case scenario of it being completely consumed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...sil fuels nowadays are essential in our everyday and life they are difficult to compensa...
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Line 2, column 557, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lost'.
Suggestion: lost
...ing vehicles because a lot of them have lose container locks so they leak a little a...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'I'?
Suggestion: the; I
...se solar power for their daily lives in the I presume that in the near future these t...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'these things'?
Suggestion: this thing; these things
...n the I presume that in the near future these thing will became a lot more common and mains...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
...hat in the near future these thing will became a lot more common and mainstream, We s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81395348837 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76089928689 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521594684385 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 150.0 20.2975951904 739% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 667.5 49.4020404114 1351% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 724.5 106.682146367 679% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 150.5 20.7667163134 725% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.0 7.06120827912 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.481809700098 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.372659428404 0.084324248473 442% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665324799211 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288041855152 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119688183848 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 76.5 13.0946893788 584% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -80.77 50.2224549098 -161% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 61.8 11.3001002004 547% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.8 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.54 8.58950901804 169% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 62.0 10.1190380762 613% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 62.0 10.7795591182 575% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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