Some people believe that university students should pay for their tuition fees because university education only benefits students themselves, not society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary society, it is generally believed that the students’ tuition fees at university time should be borne alone by the learners since themselves are the ones that get the positive consequences. Personally, I strongly disagree with this statement.
For a variety of reasons, it would be effective to society in terms of economics. It is common knowledge that people with higher education background seem to have a good-paying job which leads to the growth of employment rate. In addition, this group are going to contribute a noticeable amount to the taxes paid which drives to the enhancement of the economy of such location. Together with the improvement of the economy, citizens with high pay rates will be likely to pay more attention to their living standards which directly affect social status. It is no doubt that study brings people to the sense of responsibility to non-stop upgradation which catches up with the development of the world. As a result, the renovation of people’s mindset could reduce the unemployment level and crime rate.
Apart from the abovementioned practical concerns, it would be better if there was an available assistance to share the burden of students’ tuition fees which could create opportunities for learners to adapt to the social and technological development. For instance, doctors who get the sponsor to approach to professional training, will achieve sufficient foundation and skills to treat sickness, produce vaccine or research cue to lengthen people’s lifespan. In addition, the reduction on tuition fee seems to boost scientific research and technological innovation. In fact, almost all creative opinions come from the process of studying, researching, and training which are frequently provided at university time. Since, educated individuals are better equipped to face social and economic challenges.
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that individuals studying at university play a critical role in society as a whole and letting learners pay all the cost of studying is unrealistic. Educated residents could provide knowledge and resources to reduce nation’s crime and unemployment’s rate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nation’s crime and unemployment’s rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, apart from, for instance, in addition, in fact, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54896142433 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19218054656 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596439169139 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5743346039 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218441347151 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614701569116 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507908210554 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13401902756 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513659439654 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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