Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
I agree with the statement that ones who see their ideas through, give their all to achieve what they believe in, despite all the criticism, adversities and different opinions of others are the ones who leave a lasting legacy behind them.
In my opinion, it is a fact that any new idea, or even any proposition which is against an established norms or standards set within a social setting, be it a town, country, nation, ethnicity or organization etc. faces massive opposition in the beginning. Change is never welcomed from the outset. This is something of a default setting of human brains. Hence, whenever we see or meet any new or innovative idea in its initial form we tend to find its flaws, how it won't work and we believe it is deemed for failure.
History is full of such examples, especially in fields of science and technology. e.g. the idea of flight without balloons. The Wright brothers, when they tested their engines and failed multiple times, people around them continued to discourage them by declaring this venture as a lost cause, an impossible task; but their persistence and continuous efforts led to their success.
Similarly, in worlds of politics, the idea of democracy against monarchy or feudalism in most countries seemed an impossible task, but post magna-carta within a few hundred years major part of world has embraced democracy, despite facing many difficulties. If we take example of Nelson Mendela, who faced almost three decades of jail-time, but didn't give in and in the end succeeded to eliminate the apartheid and started a new phase in history of South Africa.
Some visionaries may fail to achieve what they want to, due to many factors like they may not live long enough or too much adversities, or even some flaws of their ideas. But, even then their efforts are recognized, and someone else may take over their mantle and try to achieve what they intended to. Sometimes, they may get their due credit, sometimes they don't. Despite the above, one must standby their beliefs and ideas; unless they are proven wrong on a level which satisfies them. Because, if one doesn't believe fully in their own vision, they won't be able to achieve it.
Furthermore, successful visionaries leave a long-lasting legacy, and they are remembered for ages to come. They are cited as examples for the next generations and lead the way for centuries to come.
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- Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won t benefit their future careers 66
- Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society s problems 33
- The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead 58
- Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader it is not as important as a leader s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers 50
- Discussing controversial topics with those with contrasting views is not useful because very few people change their mind when questioned about their core beliefs 51
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'norm'?
Suggestion: norm
...osition which is against an established norms or standards set within a social settin...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 345, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... almost three decades of jail-time, but didnt give in and in the end succeeded to eli...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ke they may not live long enough or too much adversities, or even some flaws of thei...
^^^^
Line 9, column 360, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ay get their due credit, sometimes they dont. Despite the above, one must standby th...
^^^^
Line 9, column 505, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...l which satisfies them. Because, if one doesnt believe fully in their own vision, they...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, e.g., furthermore, hence, if, may, similarly, so, then, even so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 406.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9039408867 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62820346794 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8681048463 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.611111111 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226305292018 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589046592675 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827731324257 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116242986577 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119563908971 0.0667264976115 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'norm'?
Suggestion: norm
...osition which is against an established norms or standards set within a social settin...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 345, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... almost three decades of jail-time, but didnt give in and in the end succeeded to eli...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ke they may not live long enough or too much adversities, or even some flaws of thei...
^^^^
Line 9, column 360, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ay get their due credit, sometimes they dont. Despite the above, one must standby th...
^^^^
Line 9, column 505, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...l which satisfies them. Because, if one doesnt believe fully in their own vision, they...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, e.g., furthermore, hence, if, may, similarly, so, then, even so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 406.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9039408867 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62820346794 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8681048463 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.611111111 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226305292018 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589046592675 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827731324257 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116242986577 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119563908971 0.0667264976115 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.