You are having a graduation party next Saturday night. You have invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening, which may continue till late night.
Write a letter to your elderly neighbour. In your letter:
explain what will be happening
offer your apologies in advance
invite him/her to visit your house someday
Dear Mrs. Patel,
I am writing this letter to abreast you about a graduation party which will be celebrated at my residence coming Saturday. This get together may last till late night.
There will be a gathering of 50 people who happen to be my university friends. Since we have completed our degree from the University, so we have decided to have celebrations in my outer lawn which is right next to your living room. There will be some outdoor games, drinks and dinner, therefore it is natural that people out there will make noise while playing. The music will also be played which might disturb you.
I understand that you are a senior citizen and may get disturbed by the crowd and loud music. I AM EXTENDING My sincere apologies for this in advance. I know it will be little difficult for you to bear this but I am sure you will empathize with us as the reason to celebrate is very obvious. I shall take care of the things to the extent possible so that you and your family are not affected much. Once again, I apologise for the inconvenience that may be caused to you.
Further, I would like to invite you and Mr. Patel to my house at any day and time convenient to you as I have been observing that both of you are very fond of children and somewhere my kids feel the warmth in your touch. Their grandparents are not staying with us so if you drop in some day, we all can have quality time to spend.
Yours Sincerely,
Navpreet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... sincere apologies for this in advance. I know it will be little difficult for yo...
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Line 7, column 293, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he reason to celebrate is very obvious. I shall take care of the things to the ex...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 268.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4328358209 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40938472932 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3651571721 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8571428571 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394393487331 0.216113520407 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117081142784 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680994975444 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235330913162 0.12726935374 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695236227215 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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