Dear Mr Shah,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing this to let you know that I am throwing a graduation party on coming Saturday. I have planned to invite my friends and close relatives. Also we are planning of doing outdoor barbeque party that might last till late night.
Let me explain you in detail. As you know that due to Covid infection, we were not able to enjoy our lives in last 2-3 years. That is why I have thought of arranging a party so that after long time we all can have fun. Apart from these, due to good sunny days I have planned to use my backyard where we are going to make everything from scratch. Starting from cutting of vegetables to making different sausages and grilling them on barbeque, everything is done by us.
I am offering my apologies in advance. If any sort of annoying noise is done by us then please forgive me.
Furthermore, you can come to my house for tea/coffee on some day. We have not seen each other from quite a long time. It will be a good reunion.
Thanking you in advance.
Your friend,
Jay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... invite my friends and close relatives. Also we are planning of doing outdoor barbeq...
^^^^
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... I am offering my apologies in advance. If any sort of annoying noise is done by u...
^^
Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thanking you in advance. Your friend, Jay
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, then, well, apart from, sort of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33333333333 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36809990358 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641414141414 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3924930748 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.625 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.375 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217337269421 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705155126504 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427702799436 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108883869177 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680516148148 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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