A person’s personality is genetic – if everyone in their family is kind, they will also be kind. There is nothing we can do to meaningfully change our personalities or modify our dispositions.
What do you think?
At this time, There is still many debates about about whether personality is genetic or not . Does all what we do in defining each person’s personality is meaningless or not. But I do not agree with that perspective.
In my point of view , I think our personality depends on how we grow up and our living environment . It is easy for us to develop negative traits in our environment and circumstances , which can stay with us even into adulthood . Just as how we will have more positive personality and a better outlook on life when provided with the necessary love and support from family or others . That proven that personality is chosen and determined by individuals themselves , not related to our genes.
And the reason why I say that we can choose it because not everyone in a good educational environment will become good, and those in a toxic living environment may not necessarily become bad, it is the choice of each of us. If we have a bad living environment, then let's try to look at it positively and beautifully because as we grow up, we will be able to escape from those environments, we just need to look at life in the most beautiful way we can, learn to love and forgive, then we will become someone with qualities that people always cherish.
In conclusion, everyone's personality is determined by themselves. We can become the person we want to be, it is not impossible. Always strive to be yourself and don't be constrained by existing prejudices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, still, then, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71317829457 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93316072288 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562015503876 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.2464939873 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337428036882 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140105638593 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075468418116 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218806723773 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064888332053 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.