All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with these statements and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statements might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Foremost, it is totally depends on an individual company whether they want to hire or not to hire a consultants. As far as I'm concerned, it can be a bit of both. Any extreme ca go either way. Especially, the top priority should be the welfare of the employees of the company.
On the one hand, there are several employees who are introverts and reluctant to talking about themselves then the need of outside consultants is very much. They are professionals and their forte is to look after employees and requirements of those employees. As well as, those consultants can produce efficiency in those people by talking them about their problems. In return, companies try to look after to those problems like exhaustion from work, lack of incentives or maybe lack of appreciation and recognition and to tackle them for the betterment of their employees. The consultants can produce effective report on each individual and clearly understand the need. For instance, if someone is struggling with working hours and unhappy with the company policies of total hours then he/she can share this problem with consultant rather being afraid of losing job.
On other hand, the consultants definitely charges fees for those services in which return may causes a cost to the company. And eventually led to the pay cut of the employees. It can also hinder the socialness among people in a company. People may start behaving differentiate with colleagues and put their faith in consultants rather than sharing their issues with the senior or manager. Without consultants, manager get an opportunity to talk and know about the weaknesses and strongness of its subordinates which helps to use an individual in a specific ways. For example, if someone has good communication skills then that person can be use for presentations whereas if someone is not good in communication then that person can be put on a more desk work. So, this way a manager can enhance the performances of the employees. And increase an efficiency of the employees and the company.
In conclusion, it is difficult to choose or go either way. It can solely depends on the company needs or demands or maybe the company can hire outside consultants if they have the budget without compromising the pay checks of their employees. But the wellness of the employees should always be consider above all because they are ones who are giving their best to produce results for the company and putting their efforts to achieve the goals.
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- All too often companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees such consultants would be unnecessary Write a response in which you discuss 58
- All too often companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees such consultants would be unnecessary Write a response in which you discuss 50
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a consultant' or simply 'consultants'?
Suggestion: a consultant; consultants
...hether they want to hire or not to hire a consultants. As far as Im concerned, it can be a bi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[7]
Message: The proper name in singular (ca) must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...it can be a bit of both. Any extreme ca go either way. Especially, the top priorit...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, then, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, talking about, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95933014354 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86581402811 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488038277512 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.1584899251 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9047619048 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61904761905 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255357768973 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697215449544 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493377355559 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169922956522 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506848616164 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a consultant' or simply 'consultants'?
Suggestion: a consultant; consultants
...hether they want to hire or not to hire a consultants. As far as Im concerned, it can be a bi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[7]
Message: The proper name in singular (ca) must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...it can be a bit of both. Any extreme ca go either way. Especially, the top priorit...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, then, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, talking about, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95933014354 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86581402811 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488038277512 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.1584899251 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9047619048 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61904761905 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255357768973 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697215449544 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493377355559 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169922956522 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506848616164 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.