You are given climate as field of study which particular area you will study according to your interest and why?
An increasing trend in today's world is the emergence of argument that climate is changing continuously over the passage of time. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of a particular area of climate concerned with the notion that "climate will change our future in few decades", using a practical approach.
AT the outset there are several arguments in favor of my stance to explain the major area of climate as air. But the most significant one includes not only the growth of every individual on the planet but also the betterment of society. Thanks to the benefits offered one can not only attain greater success and effectiveness but can also enhance his productivity, efficiency, quality of life with the greater ease only by living in a clean environment which ultimately comes from clean climate.
The field of study picked up by a person shows his area of interest, as I have great concerns with air so it will be preferable to undergo a deep study on this aspect of climate. Due to global warming climate has been affected during past few years as a result the air quality index has decreased. Due to change in quality of air people are suffering from lungs diseases including asthma and respiratory issues.
Advancement in technology has left great impact on our climate and our lifestyle. More people are sleeping late at night and in return they are deprived of fresh air and cool breeze of morning.
To conclude, from my perspective, people should take serious steps to improve their climate conditions and quality of air by reducing air pollution. Citizens should follow the rules and regulations in order to bring prosperity, efficiency, and development of country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 31.9359605911 160% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 285.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01403508772 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85063480751 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6468490272 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.25397266985 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149643117282 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470104090206 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631514712572 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717961574164 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540079957794 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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