In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays it has become a challenge for governments to face with ageing population. According to some elderly people can have benefits for society while some else think this puts governments in heavy trouble. In my opinion, the young generation is more useful than elderly people and the disadvantages of this issue are more than the advantages.
On the one hand, governments should set rules for elderly people who are retired and don’t work anymore. These people receive pensions which have cost for the government because should pay money to a group of people who don’t work in society and don’t have benefits for it. so, nations are faced with this problem till now. Nations should encourage people to bring more children and support them for solving this trouble. Although this takes long about a decade it is worth it because after that you have the force for labor for working and help your government. In some cases, it is necessary to have elderly persons with extensive experience specially in dangerous situations which need a professional human to support underground mines and, Uranium enrichment.
On the other hand, by natural aging without any young generation the industries, agriculture, research, and discovery are end. Because the young persons always are looking to learn new things and discover novel ways. By ageing a society this enthusiasm and motivation go lower than before and hide steadily with the passage of time. This should be considered that society needs the elderly with their experience and knowledge to help and guide the next generation and experts finding their way. Hence, by controlling the number of adults people and young force labor this can be resolve and this country can be grateful to promote in whichever of its fields and aspects.
In conclusion, governments have a crucial role in preventing this problem, and by controlling this a nation can be raised and promoted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10759493671 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62284315218 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528481012658 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4497363089 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292477707021 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105174480865 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822665628981 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185498009269 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110460034334 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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