In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online whitout paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
By growing the technology, it is possible that all newspapers and books convert to eBooks and online news. In my opinion, in the future people have more tendency to read eBooks and news online.
On the one side, technology plays an important role in daily life of people. By growing social medias people can immediately access everything. One of them is online news and online books. Every day people pay money to provide newspapers which online news support that news in wide range and everyone can read it, similarly in books which are very expensive and can alternative with eBooks. All of them are open access and nobody should not pay money for them. Not only would be save money and time but also can find every book in every country. For example, a person would like to read a book from South Africa in paper book either should looking for it in every book shop or ordered it that may not never reach to him/her but by online books any person can access every book in while of the world.
On the other side, increasing online news and eBooks need less timbers for providing paper. This has a good effect on environment which trees can be alive in addition by this atmosphere get cleaner by producing more Oxygen. Annually, cut lots of trees because of providing papers for publishers and leads to deforestation and destroyed many habitants of different species. Besides, the cost of this operates is very high and because of this the price of books and newspapers are high. Growing technology affect on this section a lot and solve the financial and environmental aspects.
In conclusion, in the near future by eliminating printed newspaper version people can use social medias and technology to know about presses besides similarly about books and other papers based publish.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun timbers is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... increasing online news and eBooks need less timbers for providing paper. This has a...
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Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...newspapers are high. Growing technology affect on this section a lot and solve the financ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he financial and environmental aspects. In conclusion, in the near future by eli...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, may, similarly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80194805195 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44313597489 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2042733446 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172263174961 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583930874429 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367703092596 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102710385686 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184190016172 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun timbers is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... increasing online news and eBooks need less timbers for providing paper. This has a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...newspapers are high. Growing technology affect on this section a lot and solve the financ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he financial and environmental aspects. In conclusion, in the near future by eli...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, may, similarly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80194805195 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44313597489 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2042733446 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172263174961 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583930874429 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367703092596 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102710385686 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184190016172 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.