In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In recent years many governments have faced the problem that people who live in villages move to urban. According to some, it has a bad effect on the population of that area, and their density declines by passing time. I think this is a positive development for a country which makes it get promoted.
On the one hand, people who live in rural areas don’t have a lot of facilities to improve their skills, knowledge, and careers and decide to move their nearest city or a capital city. Because they want to promote by using different facilities which are located in cities. For instance, in countryside places there are not any university, schools, football clubs, and so on because the young generation moving to capital cities to become a successful person in society and help his/her country in his/her major promoted. Although elderly people have more tendency to live in their hometown and do agriculture their children don’t think so. Hence, the population of rural cities decreases by passing time, and only old men and elderly people stay there.
On the other hand, by moving to the city you learn a lot of things about daily life and encounter different challenges that you don’t have before. For example, you have to rent an apartment or home and earn money solely that is a good side of the issue because learn stay on your feet. The urban life has these problems and challenges. Not only cannot you trust every person who sees but also, you have to work more than before and sometimes should stay back at work to earn money. This makes you a person who has various skills, extends of experience and, promotes rapidly. Therefore, moving to another city or to a capital city has it’s problems but has many benefits for your future life.
In conclusion, it is true that by moving people to cities the density of rural areas drops but those who stay there provide agricultural yields which is so important for society and those who are moving to other cities have this opportunity to promote themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...their density declines by passing time. I think this is a positive development fo...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: APARTMENT-FLAT[1]
Message: This word is common for American English. Did you mean 'flat'?
Suggestion: flat
...efore. For example, you have to rent an apartment or home and earn money solely that is a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76353276353 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44041998653 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498575498575 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9466026691 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.466666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312886778507 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098290083401 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656865241479 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19057845124 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345396729227 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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