In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper book.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, work plays an important role in the grown-up person’s life, as they stay more than half of their time at their work. So, it is crucial that they are satisfied with their jobs for their mental and physical health.Some people believe that workers should enjoy what they do and have a good relationship with their colleagues. Although, I don’t think that it is realistic for everyone to expect to achieve total job satisfaction. This essay will discuss the factors that influence job satisfaction and evaluate how realistic it is to expect that all workers will achieve this in their careers.
There are two main factors that affect job satisfaction. First, the employees should get along with their colleagues, build a strong relationship in order to work in a good, healthy, and safe environment. Furthermore, this will help them to be more productive and responsible in achieving their targets or goals.Secondly, a good, humble, supportive, and encouraging manager definitely will be one of the most important factors. Moreover, managers should always show them appreciation and respect. Furthermore, clear goals and instructions will make them creative and stress-free.For example, if the manager gives unclear instructions, this will mislead the employee and make them displeased with the work environment.
On the other hand, expecting full job satisfaction is a little unrealistic because it’s hard to please everyone equally. See the situation from his own perspective, and this may make him feel as a victim. In addition, some companies’ salaries are not equivalent to the value of the work required. For example, they want you to work 24 hours and give your energy and dedication. This will end up leaving the work because you are not satisfied.
In conclusion, actually work itself is not enjoyable and interesting,but with good management and team work spirit this will led to healthy working environment and workers satisfaction. Still,there are a lot of jobs with low salaries hence, employees feel fulfilled to work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...onship with their colleagues. Although, I don’t think that it is realistic for ev...
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Line 4, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,
... itself is not enjoyable and interesting,but with good management and team work s...
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Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'lead'.
Suggestion: lead
...nagement and team work spirit this will led to healthy working environment and work...
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Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ironment and workers satisfaction. Still,there are a lot of jobs with low salarie...
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Line 4, column 192, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'there is a lot'?
Suggestion: there is a lot
...ronment and workers satisfaction. Still,there are a lot of jobs with low salaries hence, employ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29447852761 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06486391114 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564417177914 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1616941364 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0327540374672 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00988809971883 0.084324248473 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.021762297469 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0185296348332 0.151304729494 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218955446063 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.