You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words
The graph depicts the number of closed shops, along with newly opened counterparts in one country over a period of 7 years from 2011 to 2018.
Overall, there was a general downward trend in both the figures for closing and opening. Noticeably, the highest statistic was recorded in the closure case at the starting point of the whole periood, while the reverse reported for opening in the middle of the timeline.
Particularly, regarding cases of closure, starting from the peak at 9,000, the number of shops halved in the following year. It later accelerated to 6,000 in 2014, then dropping to 4,000 in 2015 and flattening off in the next 2 years. At the end of the whole period, the number was recorded roughly at 3,000.
In contrast, in the first year, the statistics for opening were lower than those for the former, as there were about 6,500 shops opened, compared to 9,000 ones closed.The figure subsequently dropped by 500 in the second year, then rose to 7,000 in the third. The number of shops began to decreased again from 2013 to 2015, as about 6,500 shops were opened in 2014, yet in the following year only 500 were in the state of opening. The cases of opening soon recovered, with the statistical data multiplying by ten times in 2016. The number finally ended up almost 5,000 throughout the last three years.
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...hole periood, while the reverse reported for opening in the middle of the timelin...
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...articularly, regarding cases of closure, starting from the peak at 9,000, the num...
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...later accelerated to 6,000 in 2014, then dropping to 4,000 in 2015 and flattening...
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... only 500 were in the state of opening. The cases of opening soon recovered, with t...
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... data multiplying by ten times in 2016. The number finally ended up almost 5,000 th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, regarding, second, so, then, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75862068966 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44321660361 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2507918495 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.4 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185284866853 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761495056351 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646980701776 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122572363127 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691457437341 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.