The bar chart illustrates the percentage of businesses in the UK who had a social media presence from 2012 to 2016

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of businesses in the UK who had a social media presence from 2012 to 2016.

The given picture depicts the proportion of businesses in the UK including small, medium and large businesses who had a social media presence in the period of 4 years from 2012 to 2016.
Overall, the figure for all types of businesses grew annually except in 2015 when there was a significant decline in the number of businesses possessing social presence. Notably, large businesses increased minimally yet had the greatest presence each year.
In terms of small businesses, less than 30% had a social media presence in 2012. This figure rose to approximately 35% in 2014, after which it decreased to 30% in 2015 before recovering to roughly 50% at the end of the period. Similarly, medium businesses witnessed an identical trend, beginning at 31%, rising dramatically to under 50% in 2013 and 2014, falling to 30% in 2015 and surging again to 52% in 2016.
Turning to large businesses, the beginning of large businesses’ figure was double the small and medium enterprises (78%). The proportion stay unchanged until 2015 when it plunged to around 51% and finally rose back to 79% in 2016.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'stays'.
Suggestion: stays
... medium enterprises 78%. The proportion stay unchanged until 2015 when it plunged to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, similarly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98907103825 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78482726972 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562841530055 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5403275151 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.125 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293054659558 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134985610601 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141837298597 0.0843802449381 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201257461259 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151424664422 0.0819641961636 185% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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