Nowadays young people know less about traditions and culture than in the past. What are the reasons for it? What can be done to improve this situation?
It is true that, now traditions and culture have need forgotten among the new generations in comparison with past time. Governments should organize such cultural and social events, so that, the awareness taken place in the youth.
In these modern days, young people have not much awareness of our traditions and cultures, because of several reasons. Firstly, the fast-paced lifestyle has played an important role to man becomes less social. People should work hard to achieve a healthier life and that is the reason that, people become more antisocial. For example, we have seen that people have spent most of the time in their office. In Addition, youth people are more materialistic and as a result of it, they have ready for work with hectic job schedule and become more workaholic. Due to this situation they have less time to their family and society. All of these reasons prove that due to these young people have not get change to know their traditions and culture better. We should take appropriate steps to come out of these situations.
The most important measure is that people should balance their personal and professional life. Also, they have to spend enough time with family and society. To illustrate this, people should attend social functions so that they may be aware of traditions also have to attend some cultural events organized by governments. Private organizations have to arrange some CSR activities and get changes to know the society with better perspective.
In Conclusion, I believe that people become less social and lack of knowledge about our culture and traditions. To overcome this situation, the young generation has to balance both their personal and profession lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
... the new generations in comparison with past time. Governments should organize such cultu...
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Line 3, column 694, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...that due to these young people have not get change to know their traditions and cul...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'as to', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232258064516 0.247107548796 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.151612903226 0.15552993741 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.11935483871 0.0946569551029 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0516129032258 0.0437536398559 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112903225806 0.122223957237 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0225806451613 0.0403219363162 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61311449174 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0451612903226 0.0326786765898 138% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0806451612903 0.0861751148067 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0193548387097 0.0214082191602 90% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0119246538136 0% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1712.0 1933.38276553 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 316.052104208 89% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09252669039 6.10592293882 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20519365927 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371428571429 0.37474360046 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246428571429 0.284197041944 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.175 0.203843217982 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132142857143 0.137313986986 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61311449174 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.560935902166 97% => OK
Word variations: 54.7421940488 60.7401812628 90% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0911823647 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5 20.7725350517 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3424463975 49.5273876611 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5405405405 93.4120437189 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1351351351 15.2821509519 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.648648648649 0.594174754866 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01102204409 40% => OK
Readability: 42.1428571429 49.1922392462 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.48051948052 1.69127372897 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.341304856822 0.332604825255 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100258560855 0.102734651613 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0700223583749 0.0668474354756 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.518209939218 0.534917948617 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130379708235 0.148666948902 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137452647844 0.13441755203 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494886827579 0.0742828286743 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.349955211135 0.324241079732 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0906216899328 0.0640056729886 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247759336489 0.22793763319 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484487069831 0.0582452615562 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.41883767535 234% => Too many neutral sentences.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.88977955912 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.60220440882 77% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.00200400802 250% => Too many neutral topic words.
Total topic words: 12.0 10.493987976 114% => OK
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Rates: 62.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 5.5 Out of 9