Three popular destinations in your country or outside the country which you would like to visit.
Travelling has made it easier to travel to different places and visit the beautiful tourist attractions. I am very excited to visit three popular destinations in U.K. which have their own uniqueness.
First and Foremost, I am greatly impressed by the beauty of the London Eye. London Eye, also called millennium wheel, is one of the fabulous attractions of London. It is a Ferris wheel located on the South Bank of River Thames. It not only adds charm to the beauty of London but also one can enjoy the full view of London while being on it.
Secondly, I am very curious to visit Big Ben. Being one of the most iconic landmarks, it is a popular tourist spot.Big Ben is a nick name for a clock's hour bell located at the north end. There are ample of reasons for visiting Big Ben. For instance, I want to broaden the horizon of my knowledge about its history, capture some moments in front of it , and the most important is learn how tall it is.
The third one is Buckingham Palace. It is one of the marvellous tourist attractions of London. This Palace is the official residence of the queen of London. The most interesting part about it is , for which I am keen to visit, the Queen's Gallery. The Art works of various artists throughout the world are displayed in this gallery.
I hope to visit these top attractions during one my visits to London.
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Suggestion: learned; learnt
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'while', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258064516129 0.247107548796 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.136200716846 0.15552993741 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.089605734767 0.0946569551029 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0394265232975 0.0501201869031 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0681003584229 0.0437536398559 156% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.122223957237 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0286738351254 0.0403219363162 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62016834793 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0322580645161 0.0326786765898 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0967741935484 0.0861751148067 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00358422939068 0.0214082191602 17% => More modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.010752688172 0.0119246538136 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1365.0 1933.38276553 71% => OK
No of words: 247.0 316.052104208 78% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50403225806 6.10592293882 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20519365927 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.291497975709 0.37474360046 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222672064777 0.284197041944 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.12955465587 0.203843217982 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101214574899 0.137313986986 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62016834793 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558704453441 0.560935902166 100% => OK
Word variations: 54.8500620668 60.7401812628 90% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0911823647 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.4375 20.7725350517 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3144922008 49.5273876611 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0418250951 93.4120437189 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0266159696 15.2821509519 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.608365019011 0.594174754866 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.39078156313 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01102204409 80% => OK
Readability: 37.7047064777 49.1922392462 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.63235294118 1.69127372897 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.1796456183 0.332604825255 54% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.141810397196 0.102734651613 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0865238046754 0.0668474354756 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.62553324973 0.534917948617 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155875505177 0.148666948902 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864404804521 0.13441755203 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644210429697 0.0742828286743 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.253701982504 0.324241079732 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.151696379514 0.0640056729886 237% => No connections among paragraphs
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13947708253 0.22793763319 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721943951678 0.0582452615562 124% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41883767535 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.88977955912 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.60220440882 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.00200400802 50% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.493987976 76% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 5.5 Out of 9