When old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings.
Now a days the demand of new infrastructure along with luxury and comfort are more. Due to continuous increase of population, it is difficult and time consuming to make new buildings,therefore preservation of old buildings are much easier over creating modern buildings, however we can use these old buildings in form of school,colleges or hospitals. Also old buildings have some sweat memories with many peoples, so it is necessary to look at every single point before taking any decision of demolishment of old building over modern one.
Religious monuments, Palaces etc are some type of historic buildings, which now a days it is difficult to create such marvelous structures, We can use this places as museums, so that new generation can learn how their ancestors live their life. Also cost beneficial for preserving the old buildings on creating new one, because now a days the same material costs 50-80 times more then as compared to old one.
However we have to check the buildings and soils state time to time, that they can bear the load of building or not?, We have seen many news on the old buildings collapse and many people injured, few are died, So it's important in this case to firstly try to improve the condition of building and soil, if it is time consuming and economically less then we have to prefer the modern buildings on old one.
Currently the needs of peoples are changed, they need malls, long and clean roads etc, so for achieving all this many lands are needed, and lands that reside in town are more preferable, so for this many old buildings have to demolished for complete the necessity of peoples.
I sum up with the preservation of historic buildings are necessary to protect the historic culture and the lifestyle of our ancestors but at the same time we have to check the condition of that historic buildings also we have to check the necessity of that building on the current scenario, as we don't need such monuments who takes place on our schools and hospitals, so modern buildings are also preferable if the need of society for that place is high.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'then', 'therefore']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215346534653 0.238963963785 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.153465346535 0.154291517835 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.123762376238 0.0886310499679 140% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0594059405941 0.0506014161523 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.049504950495 0.0449626384858 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116336633663 0.123526278965 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0321782178218 0.0379742944744 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79808180978 2.82910677849 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0346534653465 0.0316879551592 109% => OK
Particles: 0.00247524752475 0.0014075125626 176% => OK
Determiners: 0.0866336633663 0.0950106342287 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00990099009901 0.0245489744465 40% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00742574257426 0.0157978311181 47% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2107.0 2899.98275862 73% => OK
No of words: 363.0 478.390804598 76% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8044077135 6.0591788892 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.65681771538 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.292011019284 0.369966551584 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.247933884298 0.285172536893 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.209366391185 0.207245337619 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148760330579 0.136322040163 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79808180978 2.82910677849 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 234.298850575 74% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479338842975 0.492565540709 97% => OK
Word variations: 50.1378540938 56.8184620615 88% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 21.1264367816 38% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 45.375 23.7468607788 191% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 116.821444949 62.0618507366 188% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 263.375 143.81877709 183% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.375 23.7468607788 191% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.25 0.728815259664 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.87931034483 102% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.71264367816 194% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 70.1683884298 52.2641144681 134% => OK
Elegance: 1.38679245283 1.64547068916 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263173194895 0.39480681544 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.187114278609 0.11556216369 162% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0825694142644 0.0736162880345 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.765552385716 0.531340600358 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.212839059598 0.15197228837 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145956117025 0.158818324754 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685557692006 0.0851127212816 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.307263207936 0.388921930462 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0268221655889 0.0677916285025 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179600684088 0.28015025965 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570735176922 0.0610219844235 94% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.8591954023 55% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30459770115 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.96264367816 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.10632183908 62% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.93390804598 25% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.04597701149 33% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 15.0862068966 46% => More topic words wanted.
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 3.5 Out of 6