Men and women employed in full-time jobs have to share evenly household chores and caring for children at home. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Traditionally, as is commonly known that, the house and its related duties is the main role for the majority of women. Consequently, many controversial discussions has been arisen around the women's right to intervene in market field as well as men . It is agreed that the women is a great power in any society , and she has to counteract the historical vision that women belongs to the households. The virtues of this argument will be proven by analyzing two main elements, how the equality concept between the spouses affect on the family and the society as well as the wonderful abilities of the women in some particular jobs which men cannot do it efficiently.
For one, at any successful community, women and men equal sharing of responsibilities. This evenness gives a positive attitude to the society members, as skills and efficiency are only the main elements to judge on any person whether men or women . For Example, when the kids find that there is no any discrimination based on gender in their family, this will have a great impact on their Personality and there will be a respect between all the family members. As this example clearly shows, the direct effect on the immediate family , consequently will led to huge impact on the society as well.
In addition, To be honest, Women has been given a wonderful abilities most of men lack. Hence, the societies should get benefit from these skills. For instance, education in early age ,to be more precise between 4 and 10 years, needs special skills and patience, and these are a divine gifts to women. It is obvious when looking at this example, there is no doubt that women should gain a very strong foothold in the real business life.
Briefly, after analyzing the areas of the equality , special skills and abilities of women .It has shown that women must contribute in all aspects of life
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['briefly', 'but', 'consequently', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'no doubt', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25348189415 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.122562674095 0.155533422707 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.08356545961 0.0946595960268 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0445682451253 0.0501214627716 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0194986072423 0.0437548338989 45% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130919220056 0.122226691241 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0362116991643 0.0403226058552 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72284918648 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025069637883 0.0326793684256 77% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.130919220056 0.0861772015684 152% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0222841225627 0.021408717616 104% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0111420612813 0.011925033212 93% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1869.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 325.0 316.048096192 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75076923077 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326153846154 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.233846153846 0.28420135186 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150769230769 0.203846283523 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101538461538 0.137316102897 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72284918648 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535384615385 0.56093040696 95% => OK
Word variations: 56.3864098581 60.7387585426 93% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.7743622355 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5385763489 49.517814964 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.769230769 127.492653851 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7743622355 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07692307692 0.814263465372 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.99599198397 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.3846153846 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 2.25373134328 1.69124875643 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191645776261 0.332605444948 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114437618407 0.102741220458 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.080882992406 0.0668466124924 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.590698776005 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.187881576148 0.148594505496 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100180262915 0.134430193775 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552429116311 0.0742795772207 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.37632831795 0.324371583561 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.117145732612 0.0638462369009 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144058583112 0.228012699653 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442836090603 0.058150111329 76% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9