Speaking the language it is medium to communicate with others. using the particular language as a universal language has it's advantages as well as disadvantages. Actually using the specific language is great idea, it has to welcome by eveyone regardless of region,nation,culture,gender and nationality.
Firstly, i want explore the merits of using a particular language as a universal language. Currently there more than 150 countries are there worldwide and more than 700 different languages are official languages, apart from that 1250 more languages are official or not recognized languages. So when one language become a universal language then we break this language barrier everyone can communicate easily and they share the thoughts, culture, emotion,joy,value, norms and their habits. now a day's everyone moving around the world so there should uniformity in language also like school student,doctors, and the other field workers using the standard uniformity to improve and show the identity like that language also should be one identity form the whole universe.
Apart from this there are so many usefulness are there by using one common language because interconnect the all people around the world. For example, someone having every good talent in the science but if they doesn't know the English, they can not express his/her opinion NASA even though they are very good in science subject so this barrier has to be removed. When it is possible?. It is possible when one language become a universal language.
Other benefits are if everyone follow the one universal language then there is no need any language test in the world to enter into the university or to work in somewhere am right. for this task English could be a suitable language because Britisher almost ruled the entire world, so English already known by most us.
Every action have it's own negative reaction like that when considering make a specific language as a universal languages there is complication also rises side by side. first of all, most of us think our mother tongue superior than rest of the language.Ego problems will rise during this process. if one particular language become as a universal they start feeling proud about their language.
Certain emotional conflicts develop between the people. old traditional people can't hope with the new changes. Moreover it is a time taking process may be required more than fifty years. For some people it is difficulty to learn new language sometimes may not possible also.
finally, I want conclude that even universal language having some kind negative impact and some short drawback but still advantages of this process more and and more. When compare with this advantages the disadvantages are very neglegible.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'well', 'apart from', 'as to', 'for example', 'as well as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235756385069 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.145383104126 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110019646365 0.0866891130778 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0687622789784 0.046263068375 149% => OK
Pronouns: 0.041257367387 0.0685040099705 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102161100196 0.118717715034 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0333988212181 0.0351676179071 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99483937424 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0137524557957 0.0309702414327 44% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.100196463654 0.0887237588012 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0176817288802 0.0209618222197 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0098231827112 0.0139019557991 71% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2842.0 2387.08602151 119% => OK
No of words: 442.0 408.028673835 108% => OK
Chars per words: 6.42986425339 5.86048508987 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.393665158371 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.319004524887 0.251872472559 127% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.253393665158 0.174417080927 145% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135746606335 0.112833075102 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99483937424 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511312217195 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 58.3078494611 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0909090909 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1976062219 48.84282405 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.181818182 120.699889404 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.818181818182 0.644075263715 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.5376344086 154% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.54480286738 595% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.9913615796 45.7405998639 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.45384615385 1.45489161554 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423380813661 0.300154397459 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110552573776 0.103427244359 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.143054728457 0.0752933317313 190% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.530734105818 0.497263757937 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136233559786 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147385099632 0.114077575197 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870193584305 0.0781384742642 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.240238307035 0.336927656856 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.113926486582 0.067059652881 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239573730869 0.210909579961 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843836960525 0.0618886996521 136% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
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Rates: 67.7 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 20 Out of 30