The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart compares the amount of money which is spent on six consumer goods in 4 different nations. Overall, the Britain gains the greatest amount spent and the Germany the smallest.
As can be clearly seen that British people pay out most of money on Photographic film, for 170,000 pounds sterling and also spend more than 160 pounds on CDs as well as Toys. In addition, 3 other consumer goods are spent higher than any given nations as well, fluctuated at around 150,000 to 160,000 pounds. France achieves the second highest amount spent on photographic film (165 thousand pounds). Moreover, the other consumer goods are expended for about 160 thousand pounds respectively.
Regarding to Italian People, Photographic film and toys have greater amount spent than any others, for 155 thousand pounds while 4 other goods are expended 5,000 pounds less. Finally, German people spend the least amount of money in all consumer goods due to the fact that their average spending was 145 thousand pounds on all of consumer goods.
In the nutshell, all of 4 nations expend the most amount spent for photographic film.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'if', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'in addition', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276699029126 0.268076937826 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.106796116505 0.116061578633 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106796116505 0.0759168565197 141% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0533980582524 0.0366838410393 146% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00485436893204 0.0131127313244 37% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140776699029 0.155750635184 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0388349514563 0.0379272487307 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43061299339 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0145631067961 0.0210936926555 69% => OK
Particles: 0.00485436893204 0.00175180941692 277% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0825242718447 0.0948980150116 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00485436893204 0.00437022459523 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00485436893204 0.00967000014798 50% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1141.0 1161.00487805 98% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.9 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13440860215 5.90752243213 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.370967741935 0.337110787985 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258064516129 0.247514529752 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172043010753 0.171178102325 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0645161290323 0.112407865282 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43061299339 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559139784946 0.546246751206 102% => OK
Word variations: 49.5406398475 49.3433353143 100% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6666666667 23.0094962315 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5670593821 42.9750493124 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.777777778 135.714022679 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 23.0094962315 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 0.689975730869 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.48048780488 270% => OK
Readability: 46.4731182796 47.7609492067 97% => OK
Elegance: 2.76470588235 2.94281807926 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336144894461 0.418131533498 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.180524271703 0.181151798455 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101751932627 0.0850326197045 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.678248757113 0.706616315825 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169013692793 0.157042692854 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19607163197 0.228904883108 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114144103941 0.108899403657 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.312664582701 0.367819155151 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.106788363547 0.0812612215331 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27393750961 0.316326947829 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110718659684 0.0921553760075 120% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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