Fashion trends are difficult to follow these days and it is widely believed that they primarily exist just to sell clothes. Some people believe that we should not follow them and that we should dress in what we like and feel comfortable in. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Throughout its history, mankind has paid a great deal of attention on what they wear. Nowadays fashion is well developed in Italy and France, which usually dictate new fashion trends to the world; however, it is difficult to follow the fashion trends since they are both so frequently updated, as frequently as once a month, and expensive. Thus, it is suggested that individuals should wear clothes which are neat and comfortable even if they are not fashion trend of the current season. Personally, I, who do not follow the trends, absolutely agree with those who consider following the trends is waste of time and money.
Once a month in Milan or Paris a fashion week is held, where designers show the latest fashion trends. The presented clothes, which are not affordable for average people, are usually bizarre and uncomfortable to wear every day, which means it is difficult to follow the offered trends. Moreover, as new fashion trends appear frequently, there is a myriad of models of clothes in shops. People who intend to follow the trend, therefore, have to spend most of their time in malls. Thus, it seems to me that designers create new trends often in order to increase the sales since if individuals follow the trends, they have to update wardrobes every month.
People who do not follow the new trends purchasing comfortable clothes saves money and time, which they can spend more meaningfully. I, for instance, buy clothes once a year, while my friend spends a huge amount of money annually on updating the wardrobe. He, therefore, has to work significantly more than I do in order not to be behind the new trends, which has an adverse effect on his family as he is often out of home. By contrast, I have more opportunity to save money for my children and to devote more time to my family rather than my friend.
In conclusion, it might be both difficult and disadvantageous to stubbornly follow the new fashion trends, which appear so frequently, since they are costly and inconvenient for everyday wearing.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'for instance', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206632653061 0.247107183377 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.160714285714 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0867346938776 0.0946595960268 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0867346938776 0.0501214627716 173% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0637755102041 0.0437548338989 146% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102040816327 0.122226691241 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0229591836735 0.0403226058552 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66526828713 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0382653061224 0.0326793684256 117% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0714285714286 0.0861772015684 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00765306122449 0.021408717616 36% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0331632653061 0.011925033212 278% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2027.0 1933.35771543 105% => OK
No of words: 347.0 316.048096192 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84149855908 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35446685879 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236311239193 0.28420135186 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.146974063401 0.203846283523 72% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112391930836 0.137316102897 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66526828713 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50144092219 0.56093040696 89% => OK
Word variations: 52.4373187315 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.7857142857 20.7743622355 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0645795113 49.517814964 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.785714286 127.492653851 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.7743622355 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.814263465372 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 48.416838205 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.06557377049 1.69124875643 63% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355562123055 0.332605444948 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104217413818 0.102741220458 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0597696433305 0.0668466124924 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.5481051117 0.534860350844 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169543831242 0.148594505496 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152590084049 0.134430193775 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770345348152 0.0742795772207 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.374257708752 0.324371583561 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.147305955688 0.0638462369009 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262939851623 0.228012699653 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564486222718 0.058150111329 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9