People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Nowaday's ,ost of the people are under stress. Some people are under stress to achieve their ultimate goals, others are stressed due to finacial reasons, work stress or unpleasant events. Although people have different ways to releive stress like reading, gardning or excersis, I prefer to travel, listen to music and go to the movie theater. Doing one of those activities makes me feel relax and refreshed.
Traveling abroad is one of the most favorit habbies. Of course, there are many other activiteis that can allevate stress like gardning and reading. However, traveling abroad is the most effective activities to reduce stress from work. For example, I worked as a pharmacist in one of the biggest pharmacy in downtown Vancouver. Since I have to deal with tremendous job taks every day, like handeling prescreptions, answer phone calls, dealing with customers enquireties and questions, I easily get so stressed and exhausted. As a result, I start to make a mistakes and misshandel my work tasks. However, when I travel to Cuba, a wounderfull city located on the east coast of Atlantic ocean in Maxico, for a couple of weeks, I immadiately feel relaxed and stress free. Ultimately, when I come back to my home country, I usually feel so refreshed to continue my work tasks in effective maner. Traveling abroad is the most effective activities I can use to get ride of stress.
In addition to traveling abroad, listen to music is another activity that helped me when I'm stressed. A sudy has been conducted at The University Of California indicated that listen to music release chemical transmitions that helps not only the brain but the whole body to relax and meditate. People who listen to music are more likely to be stress free than people who are not.For Instance, If I get so stressed due to ever increasing daily shors like biking up my daughter from school, helping here finish her home work to preparing her to sleep, I usually listen to my favorite music to feel to reduce the stress and to get the power to endouver those daily tasks. In addition, listen to my favorite childhood musics take me back to those days were limited or no responsiblities on my shoulders.
As a conclusion, we can safely say that among all the other activities that the people can do do allevate stress, travelling abroad and listen to the music are the one's the I prefer the most when I feel so stressed.
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Essay evaluation report
feel relax and refreshed.
feel relaxing and refreshed.
Sentence: Nowaday's ,ost of the people are under stress.
Error: ost Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Some people are under stress to achieve their ultimate goals, others are stressed due to finacial reasons, work stress or unpleasant events.
Error: finacial Suggestion: financial
Sentence: Although people have different ways to releive stress like reading, gardning or excersis, I prefer to travel, listen to music and go to the movie theater.
Error: releive Suggestion: receive
Error: gardning Suggestion: gardening
Error: excersis Suggestion: excess
Sentence: Traveling abroad is one of the most favorit habbies.
Error: favorit Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: habbies Suggestion: hobbies
Sentence: Of course, there are many other activiteis that can allevate stress like gardning and reading.
Error: activiteis Suggestion: activities
Error: gardning Suggestion: gardening
Error: allevate Suggestion: alleviate
Sentence: Since I have to deal with tremendous job taks every day, like handeling prescreptions, answer phone calls, dealing with customers enquireties and questions, I easily get so stressed and exhausted.
Error: enquireties Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: taks Suggestion: take
Error: handeling Suggestion: handling
Error: prescreptions Suggestion: prescriptions
Sentence: As a result, I start to make a mistakes and misshandel my work tasks.
Error: misshandel Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: However, when I travel to Cuba, a wounderfull city located on the east coast of Atlantic ocean in Maxico, for a couple of weeks, I immadiately feel relaxed and stress free.
Error: immadiately Suggestion: immediately
Error: wounderfull Suggestion: wonderful
Sentence: Ultimately, when I come back to my home country, I usually feel so refreshed to continue my work tasks in effective maner.
Error: maner Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: A sudy has been conducted at The University Of California indicated that listen to music release chemical transmitions that helps not only the brain but the whole body to relax and meditate.
Error: sudy Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: transmitions Suggestion: transitions
Sentence: People who listen to music are more likely to be stress free than people who are not.For Instance, If I get so stressed due to ever increasing daily shors like biking up my daughter from school, helping here finish her home work to preparing her to sleep, I usually listen to my favorite music to feel to reduce the stress and to get the power to endouver those daily tasks.
Error: endouver Suggestion: ender
Error: shors Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In addition, listen to my favorite childhood musics take me back to those days were limited or no responsiblities on my shoulders.
Error: responsiblities Suggestion: responsibilities
Sentence: As a conclusion, we can safely say that among all the other activities that the people can do do allevate stress, travelling abroad and listen to the music are the one's the I prefer the most when I feel so stressed.
Error: travelling Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: allevate Suggestion: alleviate
flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 23 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 23 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 416 350
No. of Characters: 1938 1500
No. of Different Words: 207 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.516 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.659 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.584 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 143 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.111 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.495 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.359 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.527 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.129 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Nowadays ,ost of the people are under stress. Some...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...is another activity that helped me when Im stressed. A sudy has been conducted at ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... be stress free than people who are not.For Instance, If I get so stressed due to e...
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Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: do
...he other activities that the people can do do allevate stress, travelling abroad and ...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'I'?
Suggestion: the; I
...ad and listen to the music are the ones the I prefer the most when I feel so stressed...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'in addition', 'of course', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217864923747 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.185185185185 0.158761421928 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.078431372549 0.0866891130778 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0631808278867 0.046263068375 137% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0610021786492 0.0685040099705 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0871459694989 0.118717715034 73% => OK
Participles: 0.041394335512 0.0351676179071 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68286166966 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0653594771242 0.0309702414327 211% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00217864923747 0.00188951952338 115% => OK
Determiners: 0.0718954248366 0.0887237588012 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00871459694989 0.0209618222197 42% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0196078431373 0.0139019557991 141% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2403.0 2387.08602151 101% => OK
No of words: 414.0 408.028673835 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80434782609 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.364734299517 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248792270531 0.251872472559 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190821256039 0.174417080927 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113526570048 0.112833075102 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68286166966 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509661835749 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 56.8330513368 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.8942074268 48.84282405 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 120.699889404 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.644075263715 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 47.8792270531 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.11971830986 1.45489161554 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273334328116 0.300154397459 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104943781481 0.103427244359 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0839326574494 0.0752933317313 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.504270858679 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.190640185572 0.151897553556 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126690217961 0.114077575197 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654783760325 0.0781384742642 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.366839515507 0.336927656856 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0449130987717 0.067059652881 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214936835106 0.210909579961 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719798949256 0.0618886996521 116% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.86379928315 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.4623655914 366% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
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Rates: 86 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26 Out of 30
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