The table below shows the numbers of people in each age group working in certain sectors in the UK in 1998 and 2006.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams present the production of coffee using the dry method.
This is a man-made linear process that starts with the sorting of beans and ends with the coffee selling. There are 12 main stages , including cleaning ,storing and bagging the coffee.
First of all, the beans are selected by hand and then cleaned using a sieve .After that the coffee beans are dried in the sun for 4 weeks and then they are turned and raked by the farmer. Before the beans are sent to the mill they are stored in a silo.
To continue the process hulling needs to be done by a worker, followed by grading using a filtering tool. The next step is bagging the coffee that can be sold as it is in the 10th stage. A special machine is used for roasting the coffee that is packed and labeled to be sold in markets.
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- The illustrations below show how coffee is sometimes produce 73
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- some people claims that people eat in many western countries is unhealthy and that their diet is getting worse critics says that these countries should change their diet 42
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...coffee selling. There are 12 main stages , including cleaning ,storing and bagging...
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Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... are 12 main stages , including cleaning ,storing and bagging the coffee. First...
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d by hand and then cleaned using a sieve .After that the coffee beans are dried in...
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
...by hand and then cleaned using a sieve .After that the coffee beans are dried in the ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hey are turned and raked by the farmer. Before the beans are sent to the mill they are...
^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'so', 'then', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203703703704 0.268076937826 76% => OK
Verbs: 0.253086419753 0.116061578633 218% => Less verbs wanted.
Adjectives: 0.0679012345679 0.0759168565197 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0185185185185 0.0366838410393 50% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0185185185185 0.0131127313244 141% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.155750635184 71% => OK
Participles: 0.141975308642 0.0379272487307 374% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.09451678679 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0246913580247 0.0210936926555 117% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.148148148148 0.0948980150116 156% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00617283950617 0.00437022459523 141% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0185185185185 0.00967000014798 192% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 803.0 1161.00487805 69% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.9 77% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3178807947 5.90752243213 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.284768211921 0.337110787985 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.192052980132 0.247514529752 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0860927152318 0.171178102325 50% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0198675496689 0.112407865282 18% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.09451678679 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.546246751206 102% => OK
Word variations: 45.386015504 49.3433353143 92% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 18.875 23.0094962315 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8576230243 42.9750493124 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.375 135.714022679 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 23.0094962315 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.48048780488 338% => OK
Readability: 38.0802980132 47.7609492067 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.57446808511 2.94281807926 54% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435789717309 0.418131533498 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.189569507498 0.181151798455 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.112929612111 0.0850326197045 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.738310964342 0.706616315825 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151258969789 0.157042692854 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.234319377162 0.228904883108 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739186047111 0.108899403657 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.317851824473 0.367819155151 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0298513531342 0.0812612215331 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301164786655 0.316326947829 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428163948192 0.0921553760075 46% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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