Many people keep dogs and cats as companions. Discuss the advantages and disadvantage of pet ownership for the animals involved and for the community as a whole
Animal is a god creatures. As the most people know that keep animal is recommended. The kind human will do that because save the animal as a pet is our obligation as a human being.
Now days, there are many cat communities in our country. They make the communities to share about their pet. They share about how to keep the pet and other. They always gather and usually they bring their pet. Keep the pet is not easy. The people must know what the animal or pet can eat or not is important to know because sometimes if the people give wrong food their pet will be sick.
Actually protect of the pet is not just about the advantages. Because of hobby so, many people want to waste their time, their energy, their money to protect them. If the people talk about that, it is so difficult because some of people willing to do it, to get their satisfaction. However, some people protect them to get another advantage. For example they protect the pet and sometimes if the pet utter they sell it to another pet lover.
For most people, keep the pet can make them happier and sometimes they can reduce their bored. After going home from work they can play around with their pet. Now it is easy to find a pet shop and every pet shop has different facility. The people usually can bring their pet to the pet shop to get a special treatment care. Like many kind of grooming. And every pet shop usually has a doctor. And now not only that facility but also they can entrust their pet if want to leave it for certain reason. If the people cannot keep their pet because of they want to go somewhere, just take the pet to the pet shop and they will keep the pet well.
It is known that dog is a loyal animal. And sometimes if they really care about their pet, their pet will also love the owner. And now there are many cute clothes. The people can buy the clothes to their pet. And many pet contests too. If the pet win the contest, many people will buy it with the highest price.
Over all, animal give many advantages for the owner. If they talk about hobby it will be difficult because if the people like something too much, they never think about money and time. They will
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Essay evaluation report
Animal is a god creatures.
Animal is a god creature.
Animal is god creatures.
because save the animal as a pet is our obligation
because saving the animal as a pet is our obligation
Sentence: And now not only that facility but also they can entrust their pet if want to leave it for certain reason.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to if and want
Sentence: If the people cannot keep their pet because of they want to go somewhere, just take the pet to the pet shop and they will keep the pet well.
Description: The token of is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to of and they
animal give many advantages for the owner.
animals give many advantages for the owner.
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Words: 409 while No. of Different Words: 156
We are expecting:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 31 15
No. of Words: 409 350
No. of Characters: 1706 1500
No. of Different Words: 156 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.497 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.171 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.938 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 80 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 52 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.194 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.013 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.387 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.334 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.509 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Animal is a god creatures. As the most people know that keep animal i...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...re about how to keep the pet and other. They always gather and usually they bring th...
^^^^
Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
... about that, it is so difficult because some of people willing to do it, to get their satisfac...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... sometimes they can reduce their bored. After going home from work they can play arou...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 330, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...p to get a special treatment care. Like many kind of grooming. And every pet shop usually...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 537, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...on. If the people cannot keep their pet because of they want to go somewhere, just take the pet...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er think about money and time. They will
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.209713024283 0.247107183377 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.147902869757 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0662251655629 0.0946595960268 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.075055187638 0.0501214627716 150% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0949227373068 0.0437548338989 217% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0993377483444 0.122226691241 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0110375275938 0.0403226058552 27% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.02899516913 2.80594681477 72% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0353200883002 0.0326793684256 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0993377483444 0.0861772015684 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0353200883002 0.021408717616 165% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00441501103753 0.011925033212 37% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2175.0 1933.35771543 112% => OK
No of words: 409.0 316.048096192 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31784841076 6.12580529183 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20517956788 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.21271393643 0.374742101984 57% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.139364303178 0.28420135186 49% => More words length more than 6 chars wanted.
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0709046454768 0.203846283523 35% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0537897310513 0.137316102897 39% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.02899516913 2.80594681477 72% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.037074148 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.388753056235 0.56093040696 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.2110094353 60.7387585426 68% => OK
How many sentences: 31.0 16.0891783567 193% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 13.1935483871 20.7743622355 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5701882683 49.517814964 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1612903226 127.492653851 55% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1935483871 20.7743622355 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.322580645161 0.814263465372 40% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 27.1299787049 49.1944974215 55% => OK
Elegance: 1.00694444444 1.69124875643 60% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384312454709 0.332605444948 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.15325089771 0.102741220458 149% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.118843657599 0.0668466124924 178% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.507280580009 0.534860350844 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17573183242 0.148594505496 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148211301174 0.134430193775 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092054799157 0.0742795772207 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.434408469182 0.324371583561 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.113509987944 0.0638462369009 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261748357569 0.228012699653 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490457125694 0.058150111329 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 8.68436873747 242% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 16.0 5.90881763527 271% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 10.4468937876 211% => OK
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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