It has to be accepted that, the region a child growing up has a significant influence in moulding his/her personality. According to me my native region has all the physical and psychological back up that needed child to grow up and become successful.
I born and grow up in a city called Kottayam which is in Kerala a southern state of India. This city provides all the needed things to grow up become a successful person to each and every children born here. The schools and teachers here provides a good academic starting to students which is later further flourishes by high standard collages here.The city give s all the necessary things to encourage sport personalities. For example, the international Nehru stadium and sports councils for cricket, football and basket ball provides all supports for the students who are interested in sports.
The city had given many valueble personalities to India as well as the world. These personalities also influence the people here to achieve something great and beneficial to the society. For instance the life of then Indian president mr: k.r narayanan is a good role model for the people here. He started his student life the schools and collages around and become the first citizen of India. His life is a good lesson for the students here.Thus. the story of the towering personalities motivate the young people in the same region greatly. These successful persons gives them a message that it is possible to achieve anything with the humble situations they have.
To conclude, it is certainly true that region and the accomplished persons influence have major impact on the people life in every region.
- nowadays more and more people decide to have children later in their life. what are the reasons? do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? 73
- Many people think that regions affect successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to. 58
- modern technology allows machines to perform the hard work instead of humans. does this have a positive or negative effect on people? give your own opinions and examples. 73
- government investment in the arts such as music and theatre is a waste of money. government must invest this money in public services instead. to what extend do you agree with this statement? 56
- the continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. what are the causes of this continued rise ? do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity? 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.273648648649 0.247107183377 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.155405405405 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.097972972973 0.0946595960268 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0371621621622 0.0501214627716 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0405405405405 0.0437548338989 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0844594594595 0.122226691241 69% => OK
Participles: 0.0371621621622 0.0403226058552 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77206486196 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0405405405405 0.0326793684256 124% => OK
Particles: 0.0168918918919 0.00163938923432 1030% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.131756756757 0.0861772015684 153% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.021408717616 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0101351351351 0.011925033212 85% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1665.0 1933.35771543 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 316.048096192 88% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01083032491 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.379061371841 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274368231047 0.28420135186 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.216606498195 0.203846283523 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101083032491 0.137316102897 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77206486196 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.037074148 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548736462094 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 55.4684200783 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.7857142857 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.483497656 49.517814964 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.928571429 127.492653851 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.814263465372 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 3.99599198397 275% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.2225373904 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.69565217391 1.69124875643 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323581767398 0.332605444948 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.150659758886 0.102741220458 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.082508590372 0.0668466124924 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.607522845606 0.534860350844 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.154459081473 0.148594505496 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137753300676 0.134430193775 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732340340177 0.0742795772207 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.380489691266 0.324371583561 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0727304442498 0.0638462369009 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239347797729 0.228012699653 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657370704302 0.058150111329 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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