Soaring population is the major problem that world face today especially in developing countries. However ,the causes which leads to increasing population not handled well yet.This essay examines those various reasons from different angles. And I personally accept that, increasing population poses more threat to current world than the other problems.
The population growing faster than ever before worldwide because of the reasons which mentioned down. Firstly, the parents in the developing nations like India and china believes more children means more earning to family. Thus, they would not mind to have many children in their family. Another reason is the climate in these countries i snot that extreme compared to western and middle east countries so the child mortality rate is very low in these nations.Thirdly, some religions instructing their believers to have more children so that their religion will expand world wide.Obviously the people who are obedient to religion will have more children in order to achieve their clerics dream.
Moreover, the significant improvement in life saving medicines and food habits has increased hum an life span to a great extent. For example, after the invention of permanent pace maker and implantable defibrillator the death rate related to cardiac related diseases has fell down suddenly. In addition to that, at present people are maintaining their health thorough daily exercise and walking .This awarness about the health provides them a long life which also major factor in increasing population
To conclude, although a number of problems affects humanity greatly, increasing population is the greatest one among these. So governments in all nations around the globe should take necessary steps to control the population
- People today move to new cities or new countries more than ever before. What challenges do they experience? What strategies are there to meet these challenges? 56
- government investment in the arts such as music and theatre is a waste of money. government must invest this money in public services instead. to what extend do you agree with this statement? 56
- nowadays more and more people decide to have children later in their life. what are the reasons? do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? 73
- few languages are increasingly spoken in different countries, while the usage of others is rapidly declining. is this a positive or negative trend? 73
- some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. others think there are much wider benefits of university education. discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ecially in developing countries. However ,the causes which leads to increasing pop...
^^
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...reasing population not handled well yet.This essay examines those various reasons fr...
^^^^
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind having'.
Suggestion: mind having
...earning to family. Thus, they would not mind to have many children in their family. Another ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thirdly
...ality rate is very low in these nations.Thirdly, some religions instructing their belie...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 571, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...dren so that their religion will expand world wide.Obviously the people who are obedient t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 571, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...dren so that their religion will expand world wide.Obviously the people who are obedient t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 582, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Obviously
...t their religion will expand world wide.Obviously the people who are obedient to religion...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 631, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the people who are obedient to religion will have more children in order to achi...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rder to achieve their clerics dream. Moreover, the significant improvement in...
^^
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...cines and food habits has increased hum an life span to a great extent. For exampl...
^^
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent. For example, after the invention of permanent pace maker and implantable def...
^^
Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...alth thorough daily exercise and walking .This awarness about the health provides ...
^^
Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...th thorough daily exercise and walking .This awarness about the health provides them...
^^^^
Line 6, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...asing population To conclude, although a number of problems affects humanity gr...
^^
Line 6, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecessary steps to control the population
^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'in addition', 'to a great extent']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275510204082 0.247107183377 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.156462585034 0.155533422707 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0986394557823 0.0946595960268 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0680272108844 0.0501214627716 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0272108843537 0.0437548338989 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105442176871 0.122226691241 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0544217687075 0.0403226058552 135% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71812557055 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0442176870748 0.0326793684256 135% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.102040816327 0.0861772015684 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0136054421769 0.021408717616 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0170068027211 0.011925033212 143% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1795.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 274.0 316.048096192 87% => OK
Chars per words: 6.55109489051 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.42700729927 0.374742101984 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.35401459854 0.28420135186 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.240875912409 0.203846283523 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153284671533 0.137316102897 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71812557055 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638686131387 0.56093040696 114% => OK
Word variations: 73.0455420964 60.7387585426 120% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 24.9090909091 20.7743622355 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.195633837 49.517814964 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.181818182 127.492653851 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7743622355 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 0.814263465372 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 3.99599198397 375% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 60.3105507631 49.1944974215 123% => OK
Elegance: 1.72972972973 1.69124875643 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361298530572 0.332605444948 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0979470013045 0.102741220458 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0559240983527 0.0668466124924 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.580097626428 0.534860350844 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130626914057 0.148594505496 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169945402856 0.134430193775 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713143590643 0.0742795772207 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.279009883497 0.324371583561 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0420538611189 0.0638462369009 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257945472499 0.228012699653 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370522391001 0.058150111329 64% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
---------------------
Rates: 70.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations to cover all aspects.