Some people believe that teaching morality should be the foundation of education. Others believe that teaching a foundation of logical reasoning would do more to produce a moral society.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented above.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented above.
Morality is the value which should be thought to everyone in their early age of education. Moral ethics and values can lead to the betterment of the society and in turn our country. I believe that logical reasoning should be one of the main factor of the education but the foundation should be morality as it helps one keep himself away from the conceitedness.
there are many scholars who has a hand in destroying the peace in our World. There are many terrorists who has studied from top colleges in the World but are now attacking different countries in the name of world. one example is the recent bangladesh hotel attack. The terrorists were students of good colleges lacking moral values which led them to do this attack.
moral values lead to the betterment of the society. It helps us keep our self down to Earth. In japan, students are told to clean the classrooms to teach them to be a Better person despite the position they are working in a company or how famous or prodigious they get in there life. This culture should be followed by every country to teach students the basic moral values to keep our world away the negative thoughts.
Recently, a Stanford Student was on a news of raping a unconscious Women after late night party. He was exceptional in academics and was representing his school in swimming. But that immoral values led him to do that disgusting thing and was disgraced by the public. We never say a swimmer raped a women, we say a rapist is good in Swimming. There are many more rape cases which only happen because these people lack moral values. The moral values lead people to become philanthropist and help others. one example is warren buffet who is one of the richest man on Earth but is philanthropist due to his moral values and in contrary dan bilzerian an ex navy officer plays poker and lives the life of libertine because he lacks moral values
in the end, I would like to say that moral values should be the foundation of our education because these values can only lead to the development of our society in positive way. There might be many scholars and celebrities who has gained popularity and money in their lifetime but if they do not have moral values these worldly pleasures will only lead to conceitedness rather than doing good for the society.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240740740741 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.173611111111 0.157235817809 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0972222222222 0.0880659088768 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.025462962963 0.0497285424764 51% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0625 0.0444667217837 141% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.106481481481 0.12292977631 87% => OK
Participles: 0.037037037037 0.0406280797675 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.52854767847 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.037037037037 0.030933414821 120% => OK
Particles: 0.00231481481481 0.0016655270985 139% => OK
Determiners: 0.099537037037 0.0997080785238 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0231481481481 0.0249443105267 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0185185185185 0.0148568991511 125% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2314.0 2732.02544248 85% => OK
No of words: 409.0 452.878318584 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65770171149 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.305623471883 0.366273622748 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.210268948655 0.280924506359 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.139364303178 0.200843997647 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0904645476773 0.132149295362 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52854767847 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488997555012 0.48968727796 100% => OK
Word variations: 53.5025139992 55.4138127331 97% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.5263157895 23.380412469 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.4043191698 59.4972553346 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.789473684 141.124799967 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5263157895 23.380412469 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.210526315789 0.674092028746 31% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.21349557522 230% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.553210655 51.4728631049 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.46902654867 1.64882698954 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317267392695 0.391690518653 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.124585776605 0.123202303941 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.111698687415 0.077325440228 144% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.527280131554 0.547984918172 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.179643050835 0.149214159877 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116996681222 0.161403998019 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788018645345 0.0892212321368 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.334694445177 0.385218514788 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0437170067805 0.0692045440612 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213638522765 0.275328986314 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818278830769 0.0653680567796 125% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.