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As time passes and people become more developed, they become more aware of the significance of children's upbringing since they are the corner stone of a successful society, and education plays a pivotal role in preparing them for the future. With this in mind, some believe that it stands to reason that nowadays, parents are more engaged in their children's education than before, while others hold the opposite view. I, personally, subscribe to the first attitude based on quite a few reasons, three of the most substantial of which are elaborated upon hereunder.
The most compelling reason is that in today's modern world, people become more cognizant about nurturing children. Not only are they more welcoming to collecting information about children, but also they use experts’ advices like psychologist when they aim to have a baby. As a consequence, it is crystal clear that they have understood that education's role in bring up their children.
Another interpretation as to why I do not concur with the latter perspective in the introductory paragraph lies in the fact that families' financial situation have change a lot, so that thanks to industrial development, more job opportunities with higher income are provided, and as a result less family are concerned about finding jobs, which gives parents a chance to provide a proper educational situation for their children. Moreover, women today work alongside men, which has brought them about more self-esteem. According to a research conducted in one of the most reputable universities in my country, the more self-esteem a woman is, the more qualified mother she will be. Therefore, it is crystal clear that today's mothers are more aware of the importance of education in their children's future.
Last but not least, we cannot overlook the vital role of schools in involving parents in their children's education. Some associations, which are called "Parents-Teachers Association”, are established in schools in which parents can be aware of their children's exams, problems, to name but two. In addition, teachers often take children assignments supposed to do them with their parents, which leads to strengthen the relationship between parents and their children.
In summary, having considered all the aforementioned arguments discussed above, I firmly endorse my point of view that compared to the past, parents pay more attention to their offspring’ education on the grounds that people are more knowledgeable about children and enjoy better financial situation. Additionally, schools help parents to have more knowledge about their children's education
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'as to', 'in addition', 'in summary', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244094488189 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.139763779528 0.158761421928 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0944881889764 0.0866891130778 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0452755905512 0.046263068375 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0570866141732 0.0685040099705 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11811023622 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0472440944882 0.0351676179071 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.4066371078 2.67179642975 128% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0275590551181 0.0309702414327 89% => OK
Particles: 0.00196850393701 0.00188951952338 104% => OK
Determiners: 0.0688976377953 0.0887237588012 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00590551181102 0.0209618222197 28% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0196850393701 0.0139019557991 142% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2699.0 2387.08602151 113% => OK
No of words: 411.0 408.028673835 101% => OK
Chars per words: 6.56690997567 5.86048508987 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.391727493917 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.311435523114 0.251872472559 124% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.245742092457 0.174417080927 141% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.211678832117 0.112833075102 188% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.4066371078 2.67179642975 128% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54501216545 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 62.6425289562 59.2087087015 106% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 27.4 20.5533526081 133% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.3901596291 48.84282405 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.933333333 120.699889404 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.5533526081 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.644075263715 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 58.5435523114 45.7405998639 128% => OK
Elegance: 1.69105691057 1.45489161554 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.300154397459 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.137541300856 0.103427244359 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.063746855189 0.0752933317313 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.61469205869 0.497263757937 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138604161991 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.114077575197 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0781384742642 0% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.36004694919 0.336927656856 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0206494586465 0.067059652881 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.210909579961 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0618886996521 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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