It is considered that the rising of teenager crimes is related to the media. I like to mention that I completely argue that the mass media focus on violent and sensational crimes. So we need to discuss the main reasons and the effect of media on increasing the juvenile adequacies then the ways to prevent and solve this unpleasant situation.
It is obvious that media increased the crime because of two main reasons. Firstly, teenager tends to have role models. So if their favorite role model involves in gangs or was criminal, they would have been negatively influenced by them and consequently might commit a crime. Secondly, media is one of the most important parts of our life which we spend most of the time with. If the media's content was violence, it would affect our behavior and we would become depressed or disappointed and as a result of that we might encourage committing crime to make our feeling better and reduce the depression.
The solutions which resolve the massive raise of juvenile adequacies is to enforce observation on the children and pay attention to age limitations. Children should use the media under their parent's observation and they have to be allowed to watch some kind of films for instance. Furthermore, parents should pay attention to age limitation of some kind of movies at first the children might break down but that is for their own benefits. Generally I enjoy bringing children up with full of attention and care.
In conclusion, most of the time people believe that violence in the media is an acceptable reason for rising of teenager crimes. In fact several reasons are known up to now, and media is one of the most discussable ones. We debate the effects and the ways to avoid the raise of the crimes above.
- It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media.What do you think is the reason for the growth in the rate of juvenile crime?What solution can you offer to deal with this situation? 73
- It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media.What do you think is the reason for the growth in the rate of juvenile crime?What solution can you offer to deal with this situation? 73
- It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media.What do you think is the reason for the growth in the rate of juvenile crime?What solution can you offer to deal with this situation? 73
- As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. 81
- We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used inbusinesses, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What thingswill they be used for in the future? Is this dependence on computers agood thing or should we he more auspicious 84
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242331288344 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.159509202454 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0674846625767 0.0946595960268 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0398773006135 0.0501214627716 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0613496932515 0.0437548338989 140% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.131901840491 0.122226691241 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0306748466258 0.0403226058552 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6301311807 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0398773006135 0.0326793684256 122% => OK
Particles: 0.00613496932515 0.00163938923432 374% => OK
Determiners: 0.0981595092025 0.0861772015684 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0245398773006 0.021408717616 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00613496932515 0.011925033212 51% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1762.0 1933.35771543 91% => OK
No of words: 304.0 316.048096192 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79605263158 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.315789473684 0.374742101984 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246710526316 0.28420135186 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171052631579 0.203846283523 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118421052632 0.137316102897 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6301311807 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529605263158 0.56093040696 94% => OK
Word variations: 54.2293261159 60.7387585426 89% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2666666667 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.035445281 49.517814964 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.466666667 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 44.9377192982 49.1944974215 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.55294117647 1.69124875643 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473567518057 0.332605444948 142% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.139745813544 0.102741220458 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0880189325855 0.0668466124924 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.584144350298 0.534860350844 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15811629788 0.148594505496 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215177551069 0.134430193775 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109837440089 0.0742795772207 148% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.361244624792 0.324371583561 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0395904427259 0.0638462369009 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.35244436766 0.228012699653 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725428919223 0.058150111329 125% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.