Some people believe that the earth is being harmed by human activity. Other feels that human activity make the earth a better place to live.
The earth has been developed enormously with the advent of sophisticated technologies. Parallel to this, greenhouse effect, deforestation, and drought are the fatal consequences of human activities that lead the world in a vulnerable situation day in day out. In many circles, it is believed that every invention contributes to the earth for being better. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether mankind activities caused many damages to the earth or make it better place to live. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that human activities have negative impact on the environment of earth rather than convert it to a better place. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reason.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that in today's hectic world, vast majorities of natural resources are in danger in different ways not only by human but also with natural disasters. Scientifically speaking, human activities play a pivotal role in the earth all around the globe. Indeed, advent of technologies provide fertile ground for people to use them in improper ways. Although technological advancement can bring many benefits for human being, it can easily contributes to harmful activities caused by human. In this way, myriads of people are not informed about the consequences and negative influences, which can disturb whole cycle of living. Delving further into the issue reveals that deforestation, pollution and even food scarcity are among destructive activities, which human have great contribution. In fact, expansion of companies without standard requirements play a key role in this realm. In addition, increase in the number of cars and unhealthy foods prevent people from a healthy lifestyle in the earth. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic revealed by a recent social research conducted in our country; show that human activities are able to bring myriads of problems such as different diseases or climate change and so forth, which is not only harmful for earth and environment but also for people who are living on earth.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that human activity can change many structures and organism such as wild life on the earth. Broadly speaking, enhancement of technology enable human to change and endangered different kinds of species, which not only can create many unusual species but also can cause mass extinction of other species. To put it in other word, technological advancement provides an opportunity for human to think about profitable aspects in a wrong way. Additionally, hardly ever human activities were beneficial to the earth and environment. However, what I alluded to above cannot overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, human activity can bring many advantages, which allows people improve their life and move forwards to a healthy lifestyle. For example, with the advent of technology people can use renewable energy instead of burning fossils fuel, which is more helpful for pollution on the earth. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, human activity has various impacts on the earth neither negative nor positive.
Contemplating all the aforementioned reason one soon realize that human activities such as cutting down forest, climate change, pollution and so forth prevent earth to be the suitable place to live. In addition, mankind activities can have negative impact on the expansion of various and scarce species.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 501, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'contribute'
Suggestion: contribute
...benefits for human being, it can easily contributes to harmful activities caused by human. ...
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Line 5, column 478, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a wrong way" with adverb for "wrong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...human to think about profitable aspects in a wrong way. Additionally, hardly ever human activi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242612752722 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.135303265941 0.158761421928 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.132192846034 0.0866891130778 152% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0637636080871 0.046263068375 138% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0217729393468 0.0685040099705 32% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127527216174 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0357698289269 0.0351676179071 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9702743735 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0311041990669 0.0309702414327 100% => OK
Particles: 0.00466562986003 0.00188951952338 247% => OK
Determiners: 0.0762052877138 0.0887237588012 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0171073094868 0.0209618222197 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0171073094868 0.0139019557991 123% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3671.0 2387.08602151 154% => OK
No of words: 581.0 408.028673835 142% => OK
Chars per words: 6.31841652324 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90957651803 4.48200974243 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.407917383821 0.338922669872 120% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.314974182444 0.251872472559 125% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.220309810671 0.174417080927 126% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.156626506024 0.112833075102 139% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9702743735 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 294.0 212.727598566 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506024096386 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 62.5996514419 59.2087087015 106% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 22.3461538462 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7769522782 48.84282405 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.192307692 120.699889404 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3461538462 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.423076923077 0.644075263715 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 53.8435720906 45.7405998639 118% => OK
Elegance: 1.83802816901 1.45489161554 126% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405422233403 0.300154397459 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0855157483667 0.103427244359 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.064415027573 0.0752933317313 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.478224081622 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170001731739 0.151897553556 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148824020906 0.114077575197 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848333206874 0.0781384742642 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.357008314182 0.336927656856 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.139740143769 0.067059652881 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282493717035 0.210909579961 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593281738614 0.0618886996521 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.86379928315 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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