In some societies, the number of crime committed by teenager is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crime should receive adult punishment.
To what extend do you agree?
Juvenile adequacies were increased in some societies, therefore some people believe that criminals who are a teenager and committing a crime should get the adult penalty. I completely agree with the equal sentence for both teenager and adult criminals. In this essay, I will discuss the reason for the agreement.
First of all, the punishment would help to prevent a teenager from committing the crime. Punishment would make a kind of fear of the result of an action; as a matter of fact if teenager knew about the ultimate result of the crime they would forbid themselves to act like a criminal. F...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ajor crimes. For Instance, when a murder takes place the victim would never have ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240677966102 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.162711864407 0.155533422707 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0440677966102 0.0946595960268 47% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0474576271186 0.0501214627716 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0338983050847 0.0437548338989 77% => OK
Prepositions: 0.162711864407 0.122226691241 133% => OK
Participles: 0.0406779661017 0.0403226058552 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.542575733 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0101694915254 0.0326793684256 31% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.128813559322 0.0861772015684 149% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0338983050847 0.021408717616 158% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0203389830508 0.011925033212 171% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1581.0 1933.35771543 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 316.048096192 85% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85555555556 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.340740740741 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255555555556 0.28420135186 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.203846283523 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103703703704 0.137316102897 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.542575733 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.56093040696 103% => OK
Word variations: 59.8906301162 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 24.5454545455 20.7743622355 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2778026665 49.517814964 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.727272727 127.492653851 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7743622355 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 0.814263465372 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 50.101010101 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.81944444444 1.69124875643 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392363751305 0.332605444948 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.153752380264 0.102741220458 150% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0785192746668 0.0668466124924 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.635344452965 0.534860350844 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.106853014857 0.148594505496 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169955261856 0.134430193775 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767148942156 0.0742795772207 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.294011413358 0.324371583561 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0837632505723 0.0638462369009 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24195325459 0.228012699653 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517623788386 0.058150111329 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.68436873747 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 5.90881763527 17% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.5751503006 311% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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