TPO-29 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

What an important aspect of human beings' lives which plays a prominent role in their prosperities, to a great extent, is education. Although there is a consequence on its indisputable role, the best way of improving the quality of education is still a moot point. Germane to this fact, a question which is the matter of debate, a controversial one, is whether high salaries for universitiy professors is a decisive factor in having a better education. Although some people may be on the belief that it is not effective, I am personally of the conviction that high wages for professors is essential to improve the quality of education for two consipcuous reasons.

One compelling reason giving in favor of this thesis is that it helps professor to focus on their responsibilities and teaching stuends a well as possible. To elucidate more on this issue, it is crystal clear that a high salary result in better life for professors. Therefore, there will be no problems that keep their minds busy, and they can spend all of their time on preparing comprehensive lectures for their classes. For instance, one of my friends is studying in Karaj Computer Science. Last week, he told me that his university in on tight budget, and it does not pay the professor a lot. As a consequence, the professors have to work in other places to compensate this lack of money. Because they have two work in two places, they do not allocate the majority of their time on preparing their notes for the classes. Thus, they are not able to provide their students enough information to learn the topics well, and the students are discontented with that. As you can see, students would not have had this problem if it were not because of low salaries of the professors.

Another reason which cannot go unnoticed is that by paying much money to professors, universities might have the opportunitiy to have well-equipped classes. To shed some light on this premise, it is worth pointing out that scine professors could make a huge amount of money by teaching, they would try to improve their work conditions too. This means that it is likely that professors try to spend money on getting access to required implements for a better teaching. For instance, when I was in Tehran studying Electrical Engineering, my linear control professor taught us the approaches of controlling air conditioners. On the other hand, there was an air conditioner connected to computer in the class. The professor utilized the computer and applaied a control method to control the air conditioner. This way we could see how the theroy works in practice, and it really clread things up. Later, I realized that the professor had bought those hardwares for the cllas. This experience taught me that if professors raise a huge amount of money by teaching, the will spend a portion of that money on improving the quality of the classes.

By way of conclusion, I am personally one of the proponents who cites a clear bias in favor of the idea that high salaries for university professors will result in a higher quality of education. To recapitulat the reasons, not only will help professor to focus on thier job, but also may result in having better classes. Due to the aforementioned argument explored in the previous statements, I recommend that every university pasy as high as possible wages to its professores.

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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'for instance', 'on the other hand', 'to a great extent']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236133122029 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.153724247227 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0792393026941 0.0866891130778 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0332805071315 0.046263068375 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0602218700475 0.0685040099705 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136291600634 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0348652931854 0.0351676179071 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89551283633 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0332805071315 0.0309702414327 107% => OK
Particles: 0.00158478605388 0.00188951952338 84% => OK
Determiners: 0.112519809826 0.0887237588012 127% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0221870047544 0.0209618222197 106% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0158478605388 0.0139019557991 114% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3367.0 2387.08602151 141% => OK
No of words: 574.0 408.028673835 141% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86585365854 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89472135074 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329268292683 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.249128919861 0.251872472559 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.205574912892 0.174417080927 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1393728223 0.112833075102 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89551283633 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470383275261 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.6246294909 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.96 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3736591733 48.84282405 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.68 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.96 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52 0.644075263715 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 47.8728919861 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.64743589744 1.45489161554 113% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324292411179 0.300154397459 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129855637616 0.103427244359 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.083381576976 0.0752933317313 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.482888157926 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.113184431116 0.151897553556 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129299626538 0.114077575197 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533996014132 0.0781384742642 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.459139854501 0.336927656856 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0534708729722 0.067059652881 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245667716429 0.210909579961 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257666149368 0.0618886996521 42% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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