The crime commitments in cities are rather than in rustic regions. In my point of view, one of the main causes of the crime growth is overpopulation and the reason for the decline of crime level is the satisfaction of life. Therefore, overpopulation exists in the urban zones and life satisfaction was found in the country sides. In this essay, the reasons of the differentiation on crime rate in two different regions and the solution for reducing the crime measure are discussed.
In the urban district, the crime level has a significant growth because of overpopulation. The number of people who live in the city is approximately large; therefore, it is tough to control a large number of people, since, major societies essentially need a massive number of police officers or powerful rules for controlling numerous people with variety type of characteristics and beliefs
On the other hand, nearly low crime level in the villages is approved, since, people who live in the villages found a lack of motivation to commit a crime hence they are rightly satisfied. That means, the main reason for the crime commitment is greed or cupidity, For example, the farmer, although, have fewer facilities than businessmen in the capital cities, seem to be peaceful and calm due to the fact that he sense no need for having rather savings or need for further education or successful business.
Finally, the solution to devaluation the crime level, in my view, the authorities should gain the security of the city by training a mass number of police officers in order to maintain the crime commitment in the cities.
In conclusion, in many countries, the majority of offences committed in the urban part of a country in comparison with the rural zone and in this essay the causes and the solution of reduction of the crime debated.
- Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping, etc. and whether you support them or not. 55
- Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. Why do you think that is? What can be done to reduce the crime rate? 61
- Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 85
- Many people believe that they should spend their money to enjoy life at present. Others, however, think that they should save it for the future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- Information revolution has changed the way of mass communications and had some negative and positive effects on individual lives as well as on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...arge; therefore, it is tough to control a large number of people, since, major societies essentia...
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in my view', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.306784660767 0.247107183377 124% => OK
Verbs: 0.11209439528 0.155533422707 72% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0766961651917 0.0946595960268 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.023598820059 0.0501214627716 47% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0147492625369 0.0437548338989 34% => OK
Prepositions: 0.16814159292 0.122226691241 138% => OK
Participles: 0.0324483775811 0.0403226058552 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89932701667 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0176991150442 0.0326793684256 54% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.141592920354 0.0861772015684 164% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00294985250737 0.021408717616 14% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00589970501475 0.011925033212 49% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1829.0 1933.35771543 95% => OK
No of words: 308.0 316.048096192 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93831168831 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.347402597403 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246753246753 0.28420135186 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185064935065 0.203846283523 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12012987013 0.137316102897 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89932701667 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.037074148 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.56093040696 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.1800464428 60.7387585426 83% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0891783567 56% => OK
Sentence length: 34.2222222222 20.7743622355 165% => OK
Sentence length SD: 126.1569667 49.517814964 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.222222222 127.492653851 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2222222222 20.7743622355 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 58.8975468975 49.1944974215 120% => OK
Elegance: 3.37254901961 1.69124875643 199% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33593739288 0.332605444948 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.206728670934 0.102741220458 201% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0757176292608 0.0668466124924 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.760704686494 0.534860350844 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176706277844 0.148594505496 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218414841508 0.134430193775 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367802328006 0.0742795772207 50% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.469835515278 0.324371583561 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0723877000735 0.0638462369009 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24659848922 0.228012699653 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493539860463 0.058150111329 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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