You want to apply for the following job. Write a letter to Mrs. Keller Describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job,
Advertisement: Housekeeper required for a private home. Experience is required.
Dear Mrs. Keller,
I would like to apply for the position of a housekeeper for your private home, advertised in "The Times Of India" dated fourth of April 2016.
My name is Tina Mahajan and I am having five plus years of experience in the area of housekeeping. I am working for a hotel for more than five years. At present, I am a supervisor with thirty staff members reporting me. We cater more than three thousand people. This position gave me the ability to handle a sundry people and myriads of situations.
I am applying for this position as I feel your private home can be benefited from my experience due to its size and requirement. My qualifications enclosed with this letter speaks for themselves.
I believe myself to be the best fit for this vacancy and hope you would also consider me for this job. Looking forward to hearing to interview to share my experience with you.
Yours Faithfully,
Tina Mahajan.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'i feel']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244565217391 0.220444632235 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.146739130435 0.167888034529 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.070652173913 0.0606518309736 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0108695652174 0.0506257000042 21% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.119565217391 0.118615021944 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130434782609 0.107062808482 122% => OK
Participles: 0.054347826087 0.041066498444 132% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78959692956 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0380434782609 0.0385302599488 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0760869565217 0.0714148451538 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0163043478261 0.0191574576366 85% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00930345855455 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 939.0 1141.60824742 82% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.134020619 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76073619632 5.53046319177 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78085437643 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.306748466258 0.284621296913 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.245398773006 0.211203875043 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.159509202454 0.133321485273 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104294478528 0.0843313296314 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78959692956 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638036809816 0.622163163488 103% => OK
Word variations: 60.2516276608 62.8969750728 96% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 14.8181818182 16.4300151701 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8472320509 44.7399317507 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3636363636 90.9928171075 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 16.4300151701 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.613754768223 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 39.3580591188 37.5504026743 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.54901960784 1.13073093955 137% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39199960537 0.331212695627 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114265799559 0.0927372745006 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0745304529359 0.0736520305886 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.577631485506 0.579516596996 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.210758133443 0.180689518051 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133000293312 0.122183219658 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10523191091 0.0765303033291 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.228875237576 0.211926503985 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0417551396575 0.0737400523855 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248603880384 0.203819188451 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813755949798 0.067151250289 121% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.45360824742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.32989690722 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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