People have different opinion about the statements that sport and social activities are equally important az classes and libraries and should grant fund as just libraries and classes,personally i belive that universities should add equal fund for sports and social activities .my propensity toward this is for numerous reasons few of which i would like to illustrate as follows.
To begin with.spending equal amount of money in sports and social event at universities provide opportunities to students to explore hidden talents .for instance many of universities students can,t affords to play outside the universities because joining sports clubs is expensive for students result in they are not able to present there sports skills, so nobody knows them that they are good players,many of our national players who playing sports at national level they went to the national team from different universities if universities didnot give them chance to play at universities we may not able to see such great players and ultimately we lost the talent.
In addition to explore new talent,spending money on social events students can have chance to socialise themself with many social problems which our society face today.for example many of the students who live in dormitories dont have chance to intracts with ordinary people,s of socitey creating events,encourage them to familirise them to social problems,after geting education students have to face all that problem in occures in socity because they have to work among the people of socitey they are not isolated from them by knowing problems students able to adress them after finishing degree.
In conclusion.classes and libraries are important elements in students life.but we cant ignore the importance of sports and social events which enable us to recognize our future talant and so familirise students with problems which frequently occure in society help them to solve them easily.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265432098765 0.229887763892 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.179012345679 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.12037037037 0.0866891130778 139% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0308641975309 0.046263068375 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0648148148148 0.0685040099705 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138888888889 0.118717715034 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0277777777778 0.0351676179071 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99619753646 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0586419753086 0.0309702414327 189% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0277777777778 0.0887237588012 31% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0185185185185 0.0209618222197 88% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0216049382716 0.0139019557991 155% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1948.0 2387.08602151 82% => OK
No of words: 305.0 408.028673835 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.3868852459 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.432786885246 0.338922669872 128% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.311475409836 0.251872472559 124% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.216393442623 0.174417080927 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127868852459 0.112833075102 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99619753646 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 53.5301080866 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6684587814 19% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 76.25 20.5533526081 371% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 154.370293451 48.84282405 316% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 487.0 120.699889404 403% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.25 20.5533526081 371% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.25 0.644075263715 349% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.54480286738 271% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 107.397540984 45.7405998639 235% => OK
Elegance: 1.57303370787 1.45489161554 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266291437706 0.300154397459 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.309954996125 0.103427244359 300% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0854552736527 0.0752933317313 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.497263757937 201% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 3.59753377e-16 0.151897553556 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225856832998 0.114077575197 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153802863065 0.0781384742642 197% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.322863643668 0.336927656856 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0887377332669 0.067059652881 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225856832998 0.210909579961 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153802863065 0.0618886996521 249% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8870967742 25% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 13.6433691756 29% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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