The reading and lecturer both about yellow cedar in northwestern North America which the population of the tree is declining for. The author of the reading argues that the declining of cedar population is due to external factors. The lecturer cast doubt the claims in the article. He thinks that the entire factors said by the article are not relevant.
First of all, the article says that dropping population of yellow cedar mab be caused by insect parasites. She thinks that cedar bark beetle attack the cedar trees and the larvae eat the wood. This hypothesis refuted by the lecturer. He says that yellow cedar is much more resistent. He add the information that the tree produce a deadly poison for the insect. Moreover, the study reveal that the beetle only attack damage tree.
Secondly, the author mention that bears is one of the reason for declining population of yellow cedar. She says that the bear claw the cedar in order to eat the tree bark. This opinion challenged by the lecturer. He says that the bear not responsible for the declining of the cedar population. He says that even in other area that no bear life, the population of tree is still decline.
Finally the author mentions that gradual changes of climate may contribute for this event. She believes that the roots are sensitive and likely suffer from partial freezing. On the other hand, the lecturer states that frost damage of the roots is more likely not caused dead of the tree. He says that the tree is still dead even in lower elevation that has warm temperature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269624573379 0.261695866417 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.139931740614 0.158904122519 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0921501706485 0.0723426182421 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0511945392491 0.0435111971325 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0307167235495 0.0277247811725 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.150170648464 0.128828473217 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0307167235495 0.0370669169778 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.34422506679 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00682593856655 0.0208969081088 33% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.150170648464 0.128158765124 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00341296928328 0.0158828679856 21% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0102389078498 0.0114777025283 89% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1555.0 1645.83664459 94% => OK
No of words: 269.0 271.125827815 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78066914498 6.08160592843 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.04852973271 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.315985130112 0.374372842146 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.197026022305 0.287516216867 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.137546468401 0.187439937562 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.100371747212 0.113142543107 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34422506679 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 145.348785872 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46468401487 0.539623497131 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.5789733643 53.8517498576 81% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0529801325 146% => OK
Sentence length: 14.1578947368 21.7502111507 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.9611874529 49.3711431718 49% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8421052632 132.220823453 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1578947368 21.7502111507 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.878197800319 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.39072847682 177% => OK
Readability: 33.8604969673 50.5018328374 67% => OK
Elegance: 2.03076923077 1.90840788429 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.724200470179 0.549887131256 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126299053305 0.142949733639 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.093319786432 0.0787303798458 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.604448552501 0.631733273073 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1418248473 0.139662658121 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.365788637359 0.266732575781 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124228335389 0.103435571967 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.631906690964 0.414875509568 152% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0368834504365 0.0530846634433 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.595414350221 0.40443939384 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333227761488 0.0528353158467 63% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.26048565121 188% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.49668874172 29% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.62251655629 193% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 3.1766004415 252% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.2958057395 155% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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